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28/03/2018 text ( 4 ) Hello everyone, could you please correct my writing? Thank you !

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Yesterday my friend asked me if I can care her dog 4 days. Because this Thursday and Friday are holidays, with the weekend, we have 4 days off. She want to travel and I don't have any plans. I agreed, so this evening, I will going to her home to take her dog.

Her dog is a Chiwawa, She prepared everything, I think that will have many funs, but I never had a dog, I have a bit worries about that I can't care good for it.

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Hello everyone, could you please correct my writing? Thank you !

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Yesterday my friend asked me if I can could take care her dog for four days. Because this Thursday and Friday are holidays, with the weekend, we have and 4 days we have a four day extended weekend. She wanted to travel and I don't have any plans. I agreed, so this evening, I will going to her home to take her dog.

Her dog is a Chiwawa, She prepared everything, I think that will have many funs, but I never had a dog, I have a bit worries about that I can't care good for it.

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Hello everyone, could you please correct my writing, please? Thank you !

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Yesterday my friend asked me if I can take care of her dog for 4 days because this Thursday and Friday are holidays. with On the weekend, we have 4 days off. She wanted to travel and I don't have any plans. I agreed. So, this evening, I will am going to got to her home to take care of her dog.

Her dog's name is a Chiwawa, She prepared everything. I think that will have many be a lot of fun, but I never had a dog, I have am a bit worries worry about that I can't take a good care of for it.

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Hello everyone, could you please correct my writing? Thank you !

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Yesterday my friend asked me if I can could take care her dog for four days. Because this Thursday and Friday are holidays, with the weekend, we have and 4 days we have a four day extended weekend. She wanted to travel and I don't have any plans. I agreed, so this evening, I will going to her home to take her dog.

Her dog is a Chiwawa, She prepared everything, I think that will have many funs, but I never had a dog, I have a bit worries about that I can't care good for it.

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Hello everyone, could you please correct my writing? Thank you !

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Yesterday my friend asked me if I can could take care her dog for four days. Because this Thursday and Friday are holidays, with the weekend, we have and 4 days we have a four day extended weekend. She wanted to travel and I don't have any plans. I agreed, so this evening, I will going to her home to take her dog.

Her dog is a Chiwawa, She prepared everything, I think that will have many funs, but I never had a dog, I have a bit worries about that I can't care good for it.

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