How good one coin shops are.
How good one coin shops are.
Recently, I often went to the one coin shops near my house.
Because I leave Japan in April and I have to pack my stuffs in my two suitcases.
There are two 100 yen shops in my residential area and each of them have different items.
I love Serria which has many goods looks fancy more than Daiso.
I was able to buy there four cute fabric bags, a laundry net and small plastic clotheshorse.
Today, I will bought a plastic bag for my shoes.
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How good one coin shops are,
Recently, I have been going (an action that has been continuous) to the one coin shops near my house.
Because I leave Japan in April and I have to pack my stuffs (you don't need to add an s, because it's already plural) in my two suitcases.
There are two 100 yen shops in my residential area and each of them have different items.
I love Serria which has many goods that look fancier (the comparative of the adjective fancy) than Daiso.
I was able to buy there four cute fabric bags there, a laundry net and small plastic clotheshorse.
Today, I will bought buy (the future tense) a plastic bag for my shoes.
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How good one coin shops are. (<----- This will change depending on what country you're in. In Australia for example, we call them 'One dollar shops' in America, I believe they call them '99 Cents' and I know in Japan they are 100 Yen)
There are two 100 yen shops in my local residential area and they both each of them have different items. (<---- local is the same as residential but it sounds more natural, 'they both' is the same as saying 'each of them' but that is also something that native speakers would use.You could also change 'items' to a number of things, 'products' would be the one I would personally chose but you could also use 'stuff' or 'goods' but then again you use goods in your next sentence so probably best not to repeat things :))
I love Serria because it has which has many goods that look fancier more than Daiso. (<---- This is a time where you would use 'because' you are comparing why Serria is better than Daiso, why is Serria better than Daiso? 'Because it has goods that look fancier than Daiso', you're explaining to use why you like one better than the other!)
I was able to buy there four cute fabric bags, a laundry net and a small plastic clotheshorse. (<---- Good job mentioning multiple items, using 'and' as the last object in the sentence! Well done!)
Today, I will buy a plastic bag for my shoes. (<---- Alternatively, you could use 'Today, I will be buying a plastic bag...' instead, means the exact same thing! Just remember that bought is past tense, something you have already done think of it as the difference between かう which is present tense ((or future tense in Japanese as well, but for the sake of this example, present tense)) or something you will be doing, andかった which is past tense, or something you have already done.. So you have already bought the bag for your shoes.
'Today, I will BUY a plastic bag...' <--- Present tense
'Yesterday, I BOUGHT a plastic bag...' <--- Past tense)
Hope this helps!
がんばりますあずさん！
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How good one coin shops are. Recently Lately, I have often went regularly been going to the one coin shops near my house, because I leave Japan in April and I have to pack my stuffs in my two suitcases. There are two 100 yen shops in my residential area and each both of them have different items. I love Serria which has many goods and looks fancy more fancier than Daiso. I was able to buy there four cute fabric bags, a laundry net and small plastic clotheshorse there. Today, I will bought buy a plastic bag for my shoes.
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How good one coin shops are.
How good one coin shops are.Recently, I’ve been going to the one coin shops near my house.
Because I leave Japan, in April and I have to pack my stuff into my two suitcases.
There are two 100 yen shops in my residential area and each of them have different items.
I love Serria which has many good looks fancy more than Daiso.
There, I was able to buy four cute fabric bags, a laundry net and small plastic clotheshorse.
Today, I will buy a plastic bag for my shoes.
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