The falling sakura petals
In the ancient time, Japanese were tender about the falling flower petals, of course especially of the cherry blossoms, and remembered memories or things. What would you think of at the sight of them?
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The falling sakura petals
In the ancient times, the Japanese were tender appreciated falling flower petals, of course especially of the cherry blossoms, and reminisced while watching them fall. remembered memories or things. What would you think of at the sight of them?Tender is an odd choice of word. I think appreciated is a better one, though there are of course many more options.
Remembering memories or things is better stated as "reminisced". I added "while watching them fall" since the sentence feels a bit stubby without it. The entire sentence could be rewritten as:
In ancient times, Japanese people held an appreciation for falling flower petals, especially cherry blossoms, and used to reminisce on past events while watching them fall.
It's about the same meaning, but flows a little better, at least to me.
いいですよ。頑張ってくださいね。
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