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My friendship I find it hard to make friends,so I have a small circle of friends. I always get nervous when I meet new people,but when I do be frineds someone,I really open up. so my friends tells me it's not you when we met at for the fisrt time,because they think me is quiet person.They are suprised that I clear tell my friends about my opinion. I don't often go out with friends,but sometimes I gather at my friends and go out for girl's night. I really enjoy spending a time with my friends.

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My friendship

I find it hard to make friends,so I have a small circle of friends.
I always get nervous when I meet new people, but when I do become friends with someone,I really open up.
So my friends tells me you are different from the person we met at for the first time, because they think I am quiet person.They are surprised that I tell my friends about my opinion.
I don't often go out with friends, but sometimes I gather at my friends' and go out for girl's night.
I really enjoy spending time with my friends.
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My Friendships

I find it hard to make friends, so I only have a small, close-knit circle of friends. I always get nervous when I meet new people, but when I do eventually become friends with someone, I really open myself up. So, some of my friends have often told me that it was not the “real” me that they met that first time, because they do not think of me as being such a quiet person. They are rather surprised that I clearly and strongly tell my other friends about my opinions. I don't often go out with my friends, but sometimes, we all do gather at a friend’s place and then go together for a girl's night out. I really enjoy spending such times with my friends!

Hi Aruringo. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your text to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. Apologies if I've misinterpreted. J.

P.S. All of us are different, personality-wise, so just be yourself, be happy, and stay within your comfort level. As to the English, be sure to leave a space after a comma (,) as I have done above. 

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