IELTS WRITING, Could you correct my essay? Thanks! The given bar graph illustrates how often American people ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 to 2013. Generally speaking, almost of Americans had the experience to eat fast food, and half of them ate it at least once a week. On the other hand, only about 5% of them never have had it. According to the chart below, American people who ate it everyday is least among Americans who ate fast food, while those who ate it once a week are most in 2003 and in 2006, and those who ate it once or twice a month are reported most in 2013. In 2003 and 2006, the scale of vertical value, which is the ‘percentage of people’, increases from ‘everyday’ to ‘once a week’, but it decreases from ‘once a week’ to ‘never’. However, in 2013 it increases from ‘everyday’ to ‘once or twice a month’ and decreases from ‘once or twice a month’ to ‘never’. In conclusion, American people in 2013 ate less fast food than in 2003 or in 2006.