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The book I've enjoyed reading in English The book which I have just finished reading and really makes me impressed and emotional is the one called gone with the wind, written by an American female writer Margaret Mitchell. Genuinely speaking, it tells the story of an American woman, who has married with a man that she doesn't love in the period of war, after experiencing a series of things, she realized that she began to love her husband, but he has left. Sure, It's not just about romance, there also have the deceptions of economic, politics in that dynasty. The main theme of this book is whatever hardship you are in, you should learn to hold on your own destiny, and face the reality directly.

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A Book in English that I Have Enjoyed Reading

The book which I have just finished reading, Gone with the Wind, written by Margaret Mitchell, really left me both impressed and emotional. Generally speaking, and with great understatement, it tells the story of a young Southern woman who marries a man that she doesn't love, all set against the backdrop of the American Civil War. Later on, after experiencing a traumatic series of events, she realized that she does love her husband, but he has already decided to leave her. To be sure, it's not only a story just about romance, but also the thin veneer of civility, the cruel, man-made manipulations of the economy, as well as the immense social and political turmoil of that era.

The overriding theme of this book is that whatever hardship you are in, you should learn to control your own destiny, but that act can only be done by directly facing reality.

Hi Neige. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your text to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.

P.S. I used “A” in the title since I assumed that you have enjoyed reading more than one book in English. If it was, in fact, the only one, then you should use “The” to identify it with specificity as you did in the first sentence [i.e. there is only one book that you just finished reading…]. Similarly, I used "Generally speaking" as that is the only thing that made sense to me. Apologies if my assumptions were incorrect.

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The book I have just finished reading and which is really impressive and emotional is "Gone with the wind", written by an American female writer Margaret Mitchell.
Genuinely speaking, it tells the story of an American woman, who is married to a man that she doesn't love, in the period of war. After experiencing a series of things, she realized that she began to love her husband, but he has left. Sure, It's not just about romance, there is also the deceptions of economy and politics in that dynasty.
The main theme of this book is whatever hardship you are in, you should learn to believe in your own destiny, and face the reality directly.


Very well writen. I just corrected some expressions and made it more natural. 
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Ok, I rememberd, thanks for your correction:)
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Correction already done but one point I wanted to raise was this. Sure, It's not just about romance, but there is also the economic climate, and deceptions of politics in that dynasty. - The economy is not deceptive, but politics can definitely be. Very good writing and the book is over 1,000 pages and reading, and understand that is a real achievement in my opinion.
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It's my french name, 汉字是“雪”.

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