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Look around! We are lucky people! Do you know why? It's because we live in the world which have many opportunities!

Look around, what do you see? The first one thing is your phone or tablet or laptop, or something else like that.. Our life is about our gadgets, isn't it? We use them everyday, every moment and every where... Yes, it's cool! The Internet is our life! You can watch a movie, listen a music, meet with new people, communicate with your friends etc... You can read it because of the Internet, by the way.

But look around again! What do you see? This world this is swallowed up...

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Look around!

We are lucky people! Do you know why? It's because we live in a world which has many opportunities!

Look around, what do you see? The first one thing is your phone or tablet or laptop or something else like that. Our life is about our gadgets, isn't it? We use them everyday, every moment and everywhere... Yes, they're cool! The Internet is our life! You can watch a movie, listen to music, meet with new people, communicate with your friends, etc... You can read it because of the Internet, by the way.

But look around again! What do you see? This world this is swallowed up...


          What is the "it" to which you are referring here?

Great paragraph! I hope this is helpful

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Look around!

We are lucky people! Do you know why? It's because we live in the world which has many opportunities!

Look around, what do you see? The first one thing is your phone or tablet or laptop, or something else like that.. Our life is about our gadgets, isn't it? We use them every day, every moment and everywhere... Yes, it's cool! The Internet is our life! You can watch a movie, listen to a music, meet new people, communicate with your friends etc... You can read this because of the Internet, by the way.

But look around again! What do you see? This world this is swallowed up...

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Look around!

We are lucky people! Do you know why? It's because we live in a world which has many opportunities!

Look around, what do you see? The first one thing is your phone or tablet or laptop, or something else like that.. Our life is about our gadgets, isn't it? We use them everyday, every moment and everywhere... Yes, it's cool! The Internet is our life! You can watch a movie, listen to music, meet with new people, communicate with your friends etc... You can read this because of [or: thanks to] the Internet, by the way.

But look around again! What do you see? This world this is swallowed up... [I don't understand the last sentence... What do you mean exactly?]

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Look around!

We are lucky people! Do you know why? It's because we live in the world which has many opportunities!

Look around, what do you see? The first one thing is your phone or tablet or laptop, or something else like that.. Our life is about our gadgets, isn't it? We use them everyday, every moment and every where... Yes, it's cool! The Internet is our life! You can watch a movie, listen a music, meet  new people, communicate with your friends etc... You can read it because of the Internet, by the way.

But look around again! What do you see? This world this is swallowed up...

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