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Why I like "Peaky Blinders".
1. The "Peaky Blinders" is a British criminal serial.2. The serial narrates (is) about 1920s England after Ward War I.
3. The protagonist of this serial is Tommy Shelby who just coming came home after the War.
4. He is the head of the family business because he is smart and strong.
5. Their business is equestrian sports betting.
6. Peaky Blinders are rule at Birmingham.
7. They pay the police and kill people who do not obey them.
8. I like this film show because of good direction.
9. There are many beautiful episodes which fascinate that are fascinating.
10. Also I like protagonists, they are so beautiful.
11. The storyline constantly makes you think about something and worry (care) about the characters.
12. I love this serial in the first place because it makes you think about such things as: the price of human life, love, family and most importantly how to remain (be) yourself,
13. Next place and second, because of beautiful love story which you can see only on this serial.
Why I like Peaky Blinders
Peaky Blinders is a British television serial about criminal gangs. It was set in England in the 1920s after World War I. The protagonist of this serial is Tommy Shelby, who is just coming home after the War. He is the head of the family business, equestrian sports betting, because he is smart and strong. His gang, the Peaky Blinders, run the city of Birmingham: they pay off the police and kill people who do not obey them. I like this film because of its good acting and its excellent direction. There are many beautifully shot episodes which I found memorable and fascinating. Also, I like the actors who portray the protagonists as they are so attractive. The storyline constantly makes you think about things as well as genuinely worry about the characters. I was drawn to this serial in the first place because it illustrates such things as the cost of human life, love, family, and most importantly, how to remain true to yourself. I continued watching it because of its wonderful love story which you can only see by watching this drama series.
Hi Daria. Good job! Whatever changes that I made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. Apologies if I’ve misinterpreted! I hope that this helps you. J.
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