Correct me please
• How do you usually spend your holidays?
• What is the best season for travelling, why?
• What tourist attraction would you recommend seeing in your country?
Thank you for your letter. I always look forward to them.
Usually I spend my holidays with my friends, family or alone. In my opinion, the best time for travel is summer, because it is the best time of the year for rest, and especially for travel. I recommend to see all my country, but in my opinion there are two of the most beautiful places to visit. They are the Carpathian mountains and the most visited tourist city Odessa
Buy,
Tim
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Correct me please
• How do you usually spend your holidays?• What is the best season for travelling, why?
• What tourist attraction would you recommend seeing in your country?
Thank you for your letter. I always look forward to them.
Usually I spend my holidays with my friends, family or alone. In my opinion, the best time for travel is summer, because it is the best time of the year for rest, [and especially for travel -- well, this is a bit of a tautology ;)]. I recommend to see all my whole country, but in my opinion there are two places which are the most beautiful to visit. They are the Carpathian mountains and the most visited tourist city Odessa [Or: "I would mostly recommend visiting the following two beautiful places, namely the Carpathian mountains and the most visited tourist city, Odessa"]
Bye,
Tim
(80 words)
1
Correct me please
• How do you usually spend your holidays?• What is the best season for travelling, why?
• What tourist attraction would you recommend seeing in your country?
Thank you for your letter. I always look forward to them.
Usually I spend my holidays with my friends, family or alone. In my opinion, the best time for travel is summer, because it is the best time of the year for rest, and especially for travel. I recommend to see all of my country, but in my opinion there are two places to visit that are most beautiful (the change in the word order makes it sound a bit more natural). They are the Carpathian mountains and the most visited tourist city Odessa
Buy Bye (buy is the verb that means purchasing something and Bye is the greeting)
Tim
(80 words)
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