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Need help! grammar right? The main argument of this text is that the idea of sustainable affordable housing is reconsidered due to the global economic issues, in order to better environment and a reasonable housing cost. The following 3 or 4 related ideas support this argument... Over 14 million people in the US must spend more than half of their income on housing, so most of them face pressure on their affordability, even with subsidies. Forty-two percent of families in Ohio move frequently due to high cost of housing, resulting in interruption of work, employment crisis and adverse effects on children. Some low-income families hardly afford housing cost, so high housing prices greatly reduce their quality of life, such as, they unable to pay for non-housing needs, food, health care ...etc.

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The main argument of this text is that the idea of sustainable affordable housing be reconsidered due to the global economic issues, in order to achieve a better environment and a reasonable housing cost.
The following 3 or 4 related ideas support this argument...
- Over 14 million people in the US must spend more than half of their income on housing, so most of them face financial problems, even with subsidies.
- Forty-two percent of families in Ohio move frequently due to high cost of housing, resulting in interruption of work, employment crisis and adverse effects on children.
- Some low-income families can hardly afford housing cost, so high housing prices greatly reduce their quality of life, for instance they are unable to pay for non-housing needs, food, health care ...etc.

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