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After my exam Finally i finished my exam and i didn't feel as bad as i thought. Instead, i felt there's some hope for me to attend xxx. But i should work harder. I should spend more time in reading. That's not hard for me. I think i can achieve this. And i will be a better person step by step.

I met li xx and another boy whose name i have forgotten on the bus. Li xx is still that kind of person who want to prove he is very clever. I don't like him. But i can feel that he treats me as the seldom person who walks on the same street with him. No, i am not like him. The only one from that school i hope to meet again is Bear-Z. But there is few connection between us. I will never meet him again. That makes me really sad.

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After my exam

Finally i finished my exam and i didn't feel as bad as i thought. Instead, i felt there's some hope for me to attend xxx. But i should work harder. I should spend more time in reading. That's not hard for me. I think i can achieve this. And i will be a better person step by step.

I met lLi xx and another boy whose name i have forgotten on the bus. Li xx is still that kind of person who wants to prove he is very clever. I don't like him. But i can feel that he treats me as the seldom rare/stange/unusual [not sure what you intend to say here] person who walks on the same street with him. No, i am not like him. The only one from that school i hope to meet again is Bear-Z. But there is are few connection between us. I will never meet him again. That makes me really sad.


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