Criticism of Advertisement
Many companies use different marketing strategies to demonstrate their products' features. However, there are many unpleasant outcomes of large scale advertising. First, an extra cost added to the price of the product. This is because many companies include the promotional fees into the product's price. Thus, many products are deemed expensive and shows exorbitant price. Second, advertising may include exaggerated claims. For example, bottled water producers usually claim that the water is Copper free; however, by thorough analysis, it was found that the bottled water has traces of Copper. Finally, some advertisements could bring detrimental health issues. For instance, fast food advertising is a growing development in the past few years, although many countries including Canada have banned theses types of adverts to children under 12 years old.
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Criticism of Advertisement
Many companies use different marketing strategies to demonstrate their products' features. However, there are many unpleasant outcomes of large scale advertising. First, an extra cost added to the price of the product. This is because many companies include the promotional fees into the product's price. Thus, many products are deemed expensive and cost an exorbitant price. Second, advertising may include exaggerated claims. For example, bottled water producers usually claim that the water is copper free; however, by thorough analysis, it was found that the bottled water has traces of copper. Finally, some advertisements could bring detrimental health issues. For instance, fast food advertising has spread in the past few years, although many countries, including Canada, have banned theses types of advertisements to children under 12 years old.-
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Criticism of Advertisements
Many companies use different marketing strategies to demonstrate their products' features. However, there are many unpleasant outcomes of large scale advertising. First, an extra cost is added to the price of the product. This is because many companies include the promotional fees in the product's price. Thus, many products are deemed expensive and carry an exorbitant price. Second, advertising may include exaggerated claims. For example, bottled water producers usually claim that the water is copper free; however, studies have found that the bottled water from many brands do indeed contain traces of Copper. Finally, some advertisements promote products that are detrimental to your health. Fast food advertising, for instance, has increased in the past few years, although many countries, including Canada, have banned theses types of adverts to children under 12 years old.0
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