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She is the person who gave me life.She is a person who always takes care of me.She is a person who always forgive me. She is a person who teach me a lot of sense.Always support me behinds me.When she ate a tasty food,she always remember share it to me.She is a good friend in my life.She always listen to my heart.I love her so much,not because she gave me a plentifuled life.Because she is my Mom.
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She is the person who gave me life.She is a person who always takes care of me.She is a person who always forgives me. She is a person who teaches me a lot of sense. She always support me behinds me. supports me OR stands behind me When she ate a eats tasty food,she always remembers to share it with me.She is a good friend in my life.She always listens to my heartfeelings.I love her so much, not because she gave me a lot of material thingsplentifuled life, but because she is my Mom.
Suggestion: your writing will sound more natural if you don't use so many relative clauses (e.g. she is a person who...) - just say 'She gave me life. She teaches me a lot.' Etc. This a style note not a grammatical correction.
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