my life
i'm a college student majoring in international nursing.i'm interested in foreigh cultures,and i want to travel to many different countries,also make some good friends there.i have such a beautiful dream,but i'm not sure whether i can do that,it's difficult.
these days i feel upset.i met a boy who was an intern and he was so attractive,i could feel that we were interested in each other,but we were both too shy,then we missed.it's a pity.
sometimes i feel that life is a joke,but we still need to work hard and also find out the beautiful things in life.
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My life
I'm a college student majoring in international nursing. I'm interested in foreign cultures and I want to travel to many different countries. Also want to make some good friends in each country. I have such a beautiful dream but I'm not sure whether I can do that because it's difficult.Lately I have been feeling upset since I met a boy who was an intern and he was so attractive, I could feel the atraction between us but we were both too shy so we missed the chance to know each other. What a pity!
Sometimes I feel that life is a joke but we still need to work hard and find out the beautiful things in life.
Pronoun I is always capitalized.
You should come to El Salvador.
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my life
I'm a college student majoring in international nursing. I'm interested in foreign cultures, and I want to travel to many different countries, also make some good friends there. I have such a beautiful dream, but I'm not sure whether I can do that, it's difficult.these days I feel upset. I met a boy who was an intern and he was so attractive, I could feel that we were interested in each other, but we were both too shy, then we missed it, it's a pity.
sometimes I feel that life is a joke, but we still need to work hard and also find out the beautiful things in life.
You should make space after using a comma and capitalize the letter I when talking about yourself :)
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I don't see much that needs correction. I think there's just a few places it might sound a little better worded slightly differently, or with shorter sentences. I just capitalized I's and added spaces as well. Well done! :)
my life
These days i feel upset. I met a boy who was an intern and he was so attractive. I could feel that we were interested in each other, but we were both too shy, and then we missed the opportunity. It's a pity.
Sometimes i feel that life is a joke, but we still need to work hard and also find out the beautiful things in life.
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Come to Jamaica, the culture is lovely.
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