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Text correction - swimming pool rules SECOND PART Hello everyone! I'm trying to write a swimming pool regulation and I'm asking help. I copy and paste my text. Please, can you help me? Is it grammatically correct? THIS IS THE SECOND PART: 8. Entry into the tank is allowed only dy appropiate aids. It is forbidden to dive from the poolside. The diving board bears the maximum weight of 80 kg. 9. Appropriate footwear is mandatory in the pool area. It is allowed the use of rubber slippers or wooden clogs barefoot in the walk areas and is highly recommended in the changing room, in the bathrooms and on the turf. 10. It is forbidden to stay in the area in adverse weather conditions (strong winds, rain and electrical atmospheric phenomena). It is forbidden to enter i the tank to people with altered physical and psychological condition. It is recommended not to bath at least three hours after a meal. 11. Please close umbrellas in case of strong wind and always when you leave the pool area. 12. Swimmers who do not observe the above rules will be punishable by law with penalty payments from 5 to 500€. 13. The tank has a depth of 1,15 – 1,25 m for half length that go 2,40 m at maximum. The inner edge of the tub maintains a constant depth of 1,15 m from the edge. 14. In this structure are applied daily, weekly and annual self-monitoring protocols which ensure optimal physical, chemical, physico-chemical and microbiological water requirements, according to d.p.g.r. 23 / R / 2010. 15. The cleaning waters are directed, thanks also to the inclination of the floor, towards wells embedded in the floor. The raised edge of the tub prevents that dirty water flowing into the bathing basin. 16. The nearest toilets are located in the dressing room adjacent to the tank. 17. The devices required for S.O.S. are located in the room next to the pool indicated with a sign bearing the words "cassetta di pronto soccorso". There is a first aid kit according to italian law, Tuscan Region d.p.g.r. 23/R/2010, annex E. The emergency number is 112

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Text correction - swimming pool rules SECOND PART

Hello everyone!

I'm trying to write a swimming pool regulation and I'm asking help. I copy and paste my text. Please, can you help me? Is it grammatically correct?

THIS IS THE SECOND PART:
8. 


8. Entry into the pool from the poolside is not permitted. Acces to the water is only permitted via the provided  ladders, steps and diving board.  
9. Appropriate footwear is mandatory in the pool area. It is allowed the  While bare feet are permitted, the use of rubber slippers or wooden clogs is preferable  in the walk areas, and is highly recommended in the changing room, in the bathrooms and on the turf.  
10. It is forbidden to stay in the area in adverse weather conditions (strong winds, rain and electrical atmospheric phenomena).

It is forbidden to enter i the tank to people with  the pool in an altered physical and or psychological condition.

It is recommended not to bath for at least three hours after a meal.
11. Please close umbrellas in casethe event of  of strong winds and always when you leave the pool area.
12. Swimmers who do not observe the above rules will be punishable by law with penalty payments from 5 to 500€.
13. The pool has a depth of 1.15 – 1.25 m for half length of the length and deepens to  2.40 m at the maximum. The inner edge of the pool maintains a constant depth of 1.15 m from the edge.
14. In this structure are applied Daily, weekly and annual self-monitoring protocols are applied to the pool water  which ensures optimal physical, chemical, physico-chemical and microbiological water requirements, according to d.p.g.r. 23 / R / 2010.


15. The cleaning waters are is directed, thanks also  due to to the inclination of the floor, towards channels

 embedded in the floor. The raised pool edge prevents that dirty water flowing back into the pool 

16. The nearest toilets are located in the dressing room adjacent to the pool.
17. The devices required for S.O.S. are located in the room next to the pool indicated with a sign bearing the words "cassetta di pronto soccorso". There is a first aid kit according to italian law, Tuscan Region d.p.g.r. 23/R/2010, annex E. The emergency number is 11

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