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About hobby
I like to watch anime.
My favorite anime is kyoukai no kanata.
I have watched anime since I was ten years old.
I watched anime because my brother watched anime.
I usually watch anime in my home.
Now I like to watch anime more than my brother.
趣味について
私はアニメを見ることが好きです。
一番好きなアニメは境界の彼方です。
アニメをよく見るようになったのは、10歳くらいからです。
何故アニメを見るようになったかというと、兄が見ていたからです。
いつも家でアニメを見ています。
今では兄よりもアニメが好きです。
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About my hobby
My favorite anime is Kyoukai no Kanata.
I've been watching anime since the age of ten.
I started watching anime because my brother has been watching them.
I usually watch anime at home.
Now I like to watch (I enjoy watching) anime more than my brother.
Kyoukai no Kanata is one of my favorite anime too! Who is your favorite character?
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About my hobby
I like to watch anime.My favorite anime is kyoukai no kanata.
I have been watching watched anime since I was ten years old.
I watched started to watch anime because my brother has been watching watched anime/it (try not to use the same noun twice in one sentence)
I usually watch anime in my home.
Now I like to watch anime more than my brother.
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You can say I've watched the anime because my brother HAS watched one. But it's not mistake
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About hobby I like to watch anime. My favorite anime is kyoukai no kanata. I have watched anime since I was ten years old. I watched anime because my brother used to watche anime. I usually watch anime in my home. Now I like to watch anime more than my brother. 趣味について 私はアニメを見ることが好きです。 一番好きなアニメは境界の彼方です。 アニメをよく見るようになったのは、10歳くらいからです。 何故アニメを見るようになったかというと、兄が見ていたからです。 いつも家でアニメを見ています。 今では兄よりもアニメが好きです。
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