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Cherry blossoms Koganei Park is famous for its cherry-blossoms. When the spring has come, the beautiful cherry blossoms bloom and many people come to see the flowers.

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Koganei Park is famous for its cherry blossoms. When spring comes, the beautiful cherry trees begin to bloom and many people come to see the flowers.

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This made me wonder, those cherry blossoms must look beautiful! hope I can see them someday...
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>> Maksymilian Thank you for your comment!
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You can also say, If you want to tell about current, ongoing spring season: The spring has come, cherry blossoms bloom and people come to see the flowers. - but please notice that I didn't use 'When" (But I would personally use are coming as it is an ongoing action)
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If you want to write about customary actions you can use present simple in a whole sentence. when valentine's day comes people usually go on dates. In your sentence you connected those 2 tenses in an incorrect way. If you wanted to use past tense you could have written : when the spring came, beautiful cherry blossoms started to bloom and people were coming to see the flowers - but it doesn't carry a recurring action's aspect.

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