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short story about a snow As is known, it rarely snows in Guangzhou. But the year before last, there came a light snow, bringing a surprise to the citizens. A picture of a snowman was widely spread on the Internet, but someone else shot the scene where the picture was taken: that snowman turned out to be really tiny, made with the snow fallen on a car, while many people excitedly crowded around the car to take photos of just that tiny snowman. Tiny as it was, citizens of Guangzhou went crazy about that snowman. Please help me to correct this article, thank you!

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A short story about a snow

As is known, it rarely snows in Guangzhou. But the year before last, there was came a light scattering of snow, bringing a surprise to the citizens. A picture of a snowman was widely spread shared on the Internet, but someone else shot the scene where the picture was taken: that snowman turned out to be really tiny, made from a layer of the snow fallen on a car, while many people excitedly crowded around the car to take photos of just that tiny snowman. Tiny as it was, citizens of Guangzhou went crazy about that snowman.

Please help me by correcting this article, thank you!
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A short story about a snow

As is known, it rarely snows in Guangzhou. But the year before last, there came a light snow, bringing a surprise to the citizens. A picture of a snowman was widely spread on the Internet, but someone else shot the scene where the picture was taken: that snowman turned out to be really tiny, made with the snow fallen on a car, while many people excitedly crowded around the car to take photos of just that tiny snowman. Tiny as it was, citizens of Guangzhou went crazy about that snowman.

Please help me to correct this article, thank you!
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short story about snow (you can't use indefinite article with uncountable nouns like 'snow', 'water', etc)

As I know, it rarely snows in Guangzhou. But two years ago, there was light snow, bringing surprise to the citizens. A picture of a snowman was widely spread on the Internet, but someone else shot the scene where the picture was taken: that snowman turned out to be really tiny, made with the snow fallen on a car, while many people excitedly crowded around the car to take photos of just that tiny snowman. Tiny as it was, citizens of Guangzhou went crazy about that snowman.

Please help me to correct this article, thank you!
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I was so curiosity about this you said, that I googled it and I found many pictures about this episode on the internet...very funny! I think that if this happened in my city, the euphoria would be the same :)
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Hahaha, I remember that. A little cute snowman!

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