March 2, 2018
It was
a nice and warm day (
Add a determiner before the noun. Try not to be confused with the adjectives.). I didn't work today. My mother and I went shopping to buy a cake for my dog. He will be 10 years old
on next Monday (
You don't need to add a preposition before the word "next + time/date" because "next can also be used as a preposition.). I can't believe that he's already been here for about 10 years...! Time flies so fast. I'll never forget when he came here for the first time. My brother said "which one is the dog...?"
because there were two small toys (
"Because" in this sentence is used a subordinating conjunction making the sentence incomplete. It's better to connect the two clauses instead.) . One of the toy
was shaped
like a dog. I'm so glad to have him in my family.
I will work all day tomorrow (This sentence is an assertion of a plan. There's nothing wrong in this sentence). I also have a plan which I'm so excited about (When talking about something, use the preposition "about" after the verb.). It will be a nice day :)
Thank you for reading this! Please correct the sentences if I have mistakes.
Good job on your entry! Your writing is definitely good. Hope Love will continue to have more birthdays! Your dog is lucky to have you as an owner.
