爱好, please check

爱好, please check

this sentence is correct but you can change some words of it like“全世界有很多种爱好”-“世界上有很多种不同的爱好。”，we Chinese usually say like this.

2.爱好让人休思。我认为,如果你作什么事的时候,你感觉幸福 和满意,这是你的天赋。

I can't understand what “休思”mean，but i think you maybe mean “relaxed”，so i think you can say “爱好让人身心放松。”and “天赋”means“gift”，so I think you don't express your meaning correctly.,maybe you can say“我认为，如果你做什么事的时候，你觉得幸福且满足，那就是你的爱好。”

3.从小时我有多不同的爱好。比如,那时侯我对跳舞感兴趣。我能终日跳舞。除了跳舞,我还喜欢画画。可是现在我不喜欢跳舞,也不喜欢画。

when we say “when i was young ”in chinese,we usually say“小时候”，and “我终日跳舞”mean “you keep dancing all day”，you can say “我每天都跳舞”,it means “i danced everyday”，by the way, you can use some conjunctions like “既....，又.....”it means “and”，so you can say“可是现在我既不喜欢跳舞，又不喜欢画画。”

4.现在学习汉语是我最大的爱好。差不多每天都我做练习,写汉字,读课文,听听力。 还我对音乐感兴趣。我喜欢弹吉他、也喜欢唱歌。有时候我自己作曲音乐。

you can't use“还”like that, you should put it behind “我”，you can say“我还对音乐感兴趣。”or “并且我也还音乐感兴趣。”you can't use “音乐”behind “作曲”， because “作曲”means “create music”

5.所以,如果我有周末,我度过时候看书,学汉语,弹吉他。但是,很可惜现在我没时侯休思,因为我准备考大学,这是我最重要的目的。

apparently you made some mistakes in this sentence especially at the beginning.you can say like this“所以，如果到了周末，我会看书、学汉语、弹吉他。但是，很可惜我现在没有时间放松，因为我准备考大学，这是我现在最重要的目标。”

although you made some mistakes ,your article is good,and keep practicing ,you'll make great progress .and hope you can get high marks in your college entrance examination .by the way if you still have something you don't understand ,you can ask me