Now or Never
(Hi, this my first entry. I don't really know what you will be feeling after reading this ^_^ but I hope it makes you feel good :) )
Everyone deserves a great life. No matter who you are, no matter what you have been through, but what matters is who you become. Sometimes people asks me how could they succeed in their lives? Let me tell you something, what you need is just to begin. You got to stop just talking about your goals and dreams because you've talked enough, you got to stop watching inspirational videos because you're inspired enough, you got to stop attending seminars, you gotta stop all the stuff you've been doing and start what you've been wanting. There is not much time for you to do what you always wanted. Believe me or not you're going to die someday and who knows the time? Just imagine that! Are you going to be healthy all the time? Are you gonna be as productive and creative as the present time? I'm sorry but the answer is NO. So why are you sitting there and doing nothing at all? Why are you waiting? What are you waiting for? Are you going to live like this? Who knows what'll happen in the future? I know a lot of people who always wanted to do great things in their lives but never had the guts to take a single step for it and guess what? They're all now lying down under tonnes of soil. They're gone. GONE. NO one will remember them at all. They are forgotten.
It's up to you now. You got to decide which side to choose. Cemetery or living forever. That's all. You've may decided already. TAKE ACTION NOW.
And remember, You deserve a great life.
I appreciate any comments and corrections on my entry. Sorry if it sounded incoherent and unconnected. I just wrote what came into my mind and I decided to share it with you.
Thank you :)
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Very well written, se7en. I found only really small issues (see below).
Also, the content is really inspiring too :)
Now or Never
(Hi, this my first entry. I don't really know what you will be feeling after reading this ^_^ but I hope it makes you feel good :) )Everyone deserves a great life. No matter who you are, no matter what you have been through, but what matters is who you become. Sometimes people asks me how they could succeed in their lives? Let me tell you something, what you need is just to begin. You got (rather: have to) to stop just talking about your goals and dreams because you've talked enough, you got to stop watching inspirational videos because you're inspired enough, you got to stop attending seminars, you gotta stop all the stuff you've been doing and start what you've been wanting. There is not much time for you to do what you always wanted. Believe me or not you're going to die someday and who knows the time? Just imagine that! Are you going to be healthy all the time? Are you gonna be as productive and creative as the present time? I'm sorry but the answer is NO. So why are you sitting there and doing nothing at all? Why are you waiting? What are you waiting for? Are you going to live like this? Who knows what'll happen in the future? I know a lot of people who always wanted to do great things in their lives but never had the guts to take a single step for it and guess what? They're all now lying down under tonnes of soil. They're gone. GONE. NO one will remember them at all. They are forgotten.
It's up to you now. You got to decide which side to choose. Cemetery or living forever. That's all. You've may have decided already. TAKE ACTION NOW.
And remember, You deserve a great life.
I appreciate any comments and corrections on my entry. Sorry if it sounded incoherent and unconnected. I just wrote what came into my mind and I decided to share it with you.
Thank you :)
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I see eye to eye with you on that, Victor.
Thank you for your nice comment.
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Absolutely agreed, it's better to regret what you have done than what you haven't. Well done!)
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I am so happy that I have received your attention and appreciation. Thank you Ian.
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For a first entry this is very good. I hope you practice what you preach, listen to what you say because I agree with you. There is nothing sadder than a life not lived in my opinion. Already corrected but well written and a good message.
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