A comfort word
I had a good friend when I was 12 years old. We did everything together but I wasn't her only one best friends. I couldn't help but think how jolly when she play with another girl. A feeling of jealousy made me upset all day and night.
One day, I came to my older sister's room. Suddenly, I couldn't hold back my tears and it slide down my face. I told her the whole situation and how terrible I feld. She comforted me althought she was astonished by my dramatic expression. She told me that I should be more confident. She also admired me that I was an outgoing person so I don't need to worry about my interpersonal relationship. "Most of all" , she said,''Do not care about everyone's thought if that make you unhappy.''
Time went by, I am maturer than I was. I can deal with lots of challenge by myself. However, every time when I am frustrated by reality, I always remind myself those words which my sister had comforted me ,''Don't worry, be happy.'' The thing that encourage me isn't those words she said but the love she had given to me.
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A comfort word
I had a good friend when I was 12 years old. We did everything together but I wasn't her only one best friends. I couldn't help but think how jolly she was when she played with another girl. A feeling of jealousy made me upset all day and night.One day, I went to my older sister's room. Suddenly, I couldn't hold back my tears and they slide down my face. I told her about the whole situation and how terrible I felt. She comforted me althought she was astonished by my dramatic expression. She told me that I should be more confident. She also told me that I was an outgoing person so I didn't need to worry about my interpersonal relationships. "Most of all" , she said, ''Do not care about everyone's thoughts if they make you unhappy.''
Time went by, I am more maturer than I was. I can deal with lots of challenges by myself. However, every time when I am frustrated by reality, I always remind myself of the those words which my sister had comforted me with , ''Don't worry, be happy.'' The thing that encourages me isn't those words she said but the love she had given to me.
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I had a good friend when I was 12 years old. We did everything together but I wasn't her only one best friends friend. I couldn't help but think about how jolly she was when she played with another girl. A feeling of jealousy made me upset all day and night.
Time went by. Now, I am maturer than I was. I can deal with lots of challenges by myself. However, every time when I am frustrated by reality, I always remind myself those words which that my sister had said to comfort me: "don't worry, be happy.'' The thing that encourages me isn't those words she said, but the love she had given to me.
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