today's lesson(ideal boss)1
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I learn new words, I make sentence with those.
・ ideal
①My ideal boss is the person who is not only gentle, but sometimes strict.
② Ideal partner does not appear easily.
・ boss(⇔ subordinate）
①My boss and I go well recently.
②It is pain for me to act as my boss say.
③I oppose my boss's opinion.
・ emotional(⇔ rational)
①You must not discuss with leaving to emotional words.
②Watching inspiring movie makes me be emotional.
③Emotional behavior lose credit.
・ efforts are rewarded
①Studying hard does not guarantee efforts are rewarded.But, it is not wasted.
②There is long way until efforts are rewarded.
・ angry with / be furious with (someone)
①The person who is angry with someone quickly is hated by everyone.
②Being furious with someone makes nothing.
・ fear/be frightened of~
①I am frightened of ghost.
②What I fear the most is not being able to reward money by myself.
・ go well(⇔go wrong)
①My coworker does not go well with my boss that makes me nervous.
②Your partner and you need to understand each other to go well.
・ have good (bad) performance
①My coworker has good performance at workplace.
②Having good performance makes you get more salary.
・ expect ・・・from (someone)
①I expect my job stopped by rain.
・ (try to) live up to (someone)'s expectation
①Too try to live up to someone's expectation, you break your body.
・ be / feel lethargic
①If you feel lethargic many days, let's do what you like.
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・ have good (bad) performance
①My coworker has good performance at our workplace.(Or "in the workplace." which is like a general "workplace".)
②Having good performance makes you get can get you a higher more salary.("makes" can sound like させる。。。like 強いる "salary" sounds better with "higher" "more money" "higher/lower salary". Another way to say this "Having good performance can net you a higher salary." This is like net 捕まえる but could also be interpreted, sort of, here as 純利益. "Good performance can lead to/result in a higher higher salary." "Individuals with better performance will receive higher salaries." "Because of my excellent performance, I receive a much higher salary than I did (before).")
・ expect ・・・from (someone)
①I expect my job to be stopped by rain. ("He's always late. That's what I expect from him." "He was on time the other day, so I expect better from him than this." I expected to receive the package from the delivery person yesterday but it has still not arrived.")
・ (try to) live up to (someone)'s expectation
①Too try to live up to someone's expectation, you (can) break your body.(This sentence is not clear. "Trying to live up to someone's expectations can destroy your body." "Trying too hard to live up to others' expectations can harm your body." "The disciple/apprentice broke his back trying to live up to his master's expectations." This could be a literal or physical "broke his back". "I broke my back finishing that report for the boss and then the plan changed and the report was never even read.")
・ be / feel lethargic
①If you feel lethargic many days, let's do what you like.(A little ambiguous. "If you feel lethargic many days (out of the week), try doing more things that you like." So in other words, "if you often feel unmotivated/tired/lazy/"..."let's" is difficult here because it implies that the person feels lethargic because they aren't doing things they enjoy, which is quite a lot for the speaker to take responsibility here perhaps. Also, it's strange because "if" is a conditional... so it sort of suggests only doing what the other person likes, when they're tired... 疲れてなら、好きな物をしましょう。 I don't know, maybe that's very different. "If you feel bored with the things we usually do then, this time, let's do something you want to do.")
①My coworker has good performance at our workplace.(Or "in the workplace." which is like a general "workplace".)
②Having good performance makes you get can get you a higher more salary.("makes" can sound like させる。。。like 強いる "salary" sounds better with "higher" "more money" "higher/lower salary". Another way to say this "Having good performance can net you a higher salary." This is like net 捕まえる but could also be interpreted, sort of, here as 純利益. "Good performance can lead to/result in a higher higher salary." "Individuals with better performance will receive higher salaries." "Because of my excellent performance, I receive a much higher salary than I did (before).")
・ expect ・・・from (someone)
①I expect my job to be stopped by rain. ("He's always late. That's what I expect from him." "He was on time the other day, so I expect better from him than this." I expected to receive the package from the delivery person yesterday but it has still not arrived.")
・ (try to) live up to (someone)'s expectation
①Too try to live up to someone's expectation, you (can) break your body.(This sentence is not clear. "Trying to live up to someone's expectations can destroy your body." "Trying too hard to live up to others' expectations can harm your body." "The disciple/apprentice broke his back trying to live up to his master's expectations." This could be a literal or physical "broke his back". "I broke my back finishing that report for the boss and then the plan changed and the report was never even read.")
・ be / feel lethargic
①If you feel lethargic many days, let's do what you like.(A little ambiguous. "If you feel lethargic many days (out of the week), try doing more things that you like." So in other words, "if you often feel unmotivated/tired/lazy/"..."let's" is difficult here because it implies that the person feels lethargic because they aren't doing things they enjoy, which is quite a lot for the speaker to take responsibility here perhaps. Also, it's strange because "if" is a conditional... so it sort of suggests only doing what the other person likes, when they're tired... 疲れてなら、好きな物をしましょう。 I don't know, maybe that's very different. "If you feel bored with the things we usually do then, this time, let's do something you want to do.")
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・ emotional(⇔ rational)
①You must not discuss with leaving to with emotional words.(This sentence is not good, I assume you mean "leaving" 外出?)
②Watching inspiring movie makes me be feel emotional.
③Emotional behavior loses credit.(Typically "credit" has to be with something. "Acting/Behaving emotionally can lose one credit with others." "credit" by itself is usually but not always money related. )
・ efforts are rewarded
①Studying hard does not guarantee (one's) efforts are rewarded.But, it is not wasted.("But they are not wasted." referring to "efforts" is better.)
②There is a long way until before efforts are rewarded.("It is a..." sounds better. And "until" is usually used with time, "before" with distances. Even if, as here, "way" refers to time metaphorically.)
・ angry with / be furious with (someone)
①The person who is angry with someone quickly is hated by everyone.(This "someone" is not general enough here. It sounds like it's referring to a specific incident with a specific someone rather than a general statement about people and their behavior and others' reactions to that behavior. "A person who becomes angry with others quickly will be hated by everyone." sounds better I think.)
②Being furious with someone makes results in nothing.(Or "Being furious with someone is pointless." "Being furious with someone can have no productive outcome.")
・ fear/be frightened of~
①I am frightened of ghosts.("ghosts" in general. "I am frightened of a ghost." Some ghost, unknown to the listener. "I am frightened of the ghost." A particular ghost, known to the listener.)
②What I fear the most is not being able to reward make money by/for myself.("reward" is only used with work and jobs in sayings/idioms. "Hard work is its own reward." Otherwise a "reward" is for something but not something done routinely and necessarily like work. 褒美？謝礼？)
・ go well(⇔go wrong)
①My coworker does not go work well with my boss and that makes me nervous.("Things are not going well between my coworker and my boss and...")
②Your partner and you need to understand each other to go get along well. (For whatever reason "You and your..." is much more common in English. You can say "go well together" here but... "get along well" sounds better I think. "go well" sounds like, again, like "cheese and bread" "ice cream and cake" something, I don't know. "This tie goes well with that shirt." It's okay for color coordination things to. You can say that two people "go well together" but... it means something like color coordination.)
①You must not discuss with leaving to with emotional words.(This sentence is not good, I assume you mean "leaving" 外出?)
②Watching inspiring movie makes me be feel emotional.
③Emotional behavior loses credit.(Typically "credit" has to be with something. "Acting/Behaving emotionally can lose one credit with others." "credit" by itself is usually but not always money related. )
・ efforts are rewarded
①Studying hard does not guarantee (one's) efforts are rewarded.But, it is not wasted.("But they are not wasted." referring to "efforts" is better.)
②There is a long way until before efforts are rewarded.("It is a..." sounds better. And "until" is usually used with time, "before" with distances. Even if, as here, "way" refers to time metaphorically.)
・ angry with / be furious with (someone)
①The person who is angry with someone quickly is hated by everyone.(This "someone" is not general enough here. It sounds like it's referring to a specific incident with a specific someone rather than a general statement about people and their behavior and others' reactions to that behavior. "A person who becomes angry with others quickly will be hated by everyone." sounds better I think.)
②Being furious with someone makes results in nothing.(Or "Being furious with someone is pointless." "Being furious with someone can have no productive outcome.")
・ fear/be frightened of~
①I am frightened of ghosts.("ghosts" in general. "I am frightened of a ghost." Some ghost, unknown to the listener. "I am frightened of the ghost." A particular ghost, known to the listener.)
②What I fear the most is not being able to reward make money by/for myself.("reward" is only used with work and jobs in sayings/idioms. "Hard work is its own reward." Otherwise a "reward" is for something but not something done routinely and necessarily like work. 褒美？謝礼？)
・ go well(⇔go wrong)
①My coworker does not go work well with my boss and that makes me nervous.("Things are not going well between my coworker and my boss and...")
②Your partner and you need to understand each other to go get along well. (For whatever reason "You and your..." is much more common in English. You can say "go well together" here but... "get along well" sounds better I think. "go well" sounds like, again, like "cheese and bread" "ice cream and cake" something, I don't know. "This tie goes well with that shirt." It's okay for color coordination things to. You can say that two people "go well together" but... it means something like color coordination.)
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today's lesson(ideal boss)1
If I made mistakes, please correct itthem><("it" sounds strange here because it seems like it is a pronoun referring to "mistakes" which is plural, rather than the notebook entry which is unstated.)I learn new words, I make sentence with thosethem.(This is a general statement referring to your studying methods. If you want to refer to this particular list of new words, then "I learned some new words and have made sentences with them." would be better.)
・ ideal
①My ideal boss is the person who is not only gentle, but sometimes strict.(Okay, but "gentle" and "strict" are very different so "not only" sounds a little strange. "The food was not just good, it was also inexpensive." "The food was good, but also expensive." "My ideal boss is someone who is gentle even when they are strict." "...who is both gentle and strict." "... who is gentle, but also strict." "someone" is better here, "the person" "the" is the specific pronoun and this sounds strange here since we are imagining this person. "My ideal boss is/would be a person who is... " "someone" is better though.)
② An/The ideal partner does not appear easily. (This sounds like 理想な相棒が現れにくいです。Maybe not, but "appear" has a bit of a sense of coming out of the air, or it emphasizes the previous absence. "He didn't [appear/show up] until two hours after the meeting was already over." "I was driving, and the deer appeared suddenly out of nowhere. I had to swerve to miss it and almost lost control of the car." I think here, much better would be "It is difficult to find an ideal partner. The ideal partner is difficult to find." "It is hard to find an ideal partner." Again "the" is very specific. "The ideal partner" almost suggests that there is one ideal partner or that it is an ideal that is defined as ideal for everyone. ("ideal" as noun, and adjective here.))
・ boss(⇔ subordinate）
①My boss and I go well together recently.(A little awkward. "My boss and I have gotten along together well recently." sounds better. "Things are going well with my boss." but in English, this could be a little ambiguous. "Cheese and bread go well together.")
②It is painful for me to act as my boss says.(This is 痛い though maybe a mental/psychological 痛み. 迷惑 would be "It is a pain for me to do as my boss says." "act" is a little difficult here because it has an association of 行為 rather than ... I'm not sure... behavior, appearances, rather than actions, job assignments. "do" is better for job assignments and things. For instance "Because I despise the new clients, it is painful for me to act pleasant to them as my boss has insisted." "Because he often asks me to do unnecessary, boring things, it is a pain for me to do as my boss asks/requests.")
③I oppose my boss's opinion. ("I am opposed to..." is possibly better, depending on context.)
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