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At the English lesson... I work in IT-department. Twice a week we have English lessons inside company. At the last lesson our teacher made task for us. You need to hire a person. And the three candidates are equal except for their hobbies. One person like to play basketball. Second person like to play chess. Third person like to play video games. 1. Which person will you hire to work if he or she worker (in my company for example it's programmer)? 2. If you need to hire a boss, which candidate will you choose? 3. Which person will you choose for a job of a microsurgeon? We answered to this questions and discussed. I choosed the person who play chess in the first two cases. For workers it's useful because it's develop analytical thinking. For boss it's useful because chess help to choose best strategies. For a microsurgeon, it is more useful to play on video games because it helps don't make mistakes and exactly to fall into a small area. Please correct this text. And it is interesting for me, how can you answer these questions? And why? Thank you.

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At the English lesson...

I work in IT-department. Twice a week we have English lessons inside the company. At the last lesson, our teacher made the task for us. You need to hire a person. And the three candidates are equal except for their hobbies. One person likes to play basketball. The second person likes to play chess. The third person likes to play video games.
1. Which person will you hire to work if he or she usual worker (in my company, for example, it's programmer)?
2. If you need to hire a boss, which candidate will you choose?
3. Which person will you choose for a job of a microsurgeon?
We answered this questions and discussed. I chose the person who plays chess in the first two cases. For workers, it's useful because it develops analytical thinking. For the boss, it's useful because chess help to choose best strategies. For a microsurgeon, it is more useful to play on video games because it helps don't make mistakes and exactly to fall into a small area.
Please correct this text. And it is interesting to me, how can you answer these questions? And why? Thank you.
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I work in IT/I work in an IT-department. Twice a week we have English lessons at our company. At In the last lesson our teacher gave us a task for us. "You need to hire a person. And the three candidates are equal except for their hobbies. One person likes to play basketball. The second person likes to play chess. The third person likes to play video games. aù (do you mean so?)
1. Which person would you hire to work if he or she usual worker (what do you mean by this?) (in my company for example it's programmer)?
2. If you need to hire a boss, which candidate would you choose?
3. Which person would you choose for a job of as a microsurgeon?
We answered to this these questions and discussed them. I choosed chose the person who plays chess in the first two cases. For a workers it's useful because it's develops analytical thinking. For a boss it's useful because chess helps to choose the best/better strategies. For a microsurgeon, it is more useful to play on video games because it helps don't avoid making mistakes and exactly to fall into a small area (what do you mean by this?)

Please correct this text. And it is would be interesting for me, how can would you answer these questions? And why? Thank you.

For a better correction, what were you trying to say with the sentences highlighted in yellow?
Apart from that, you made minor mistakes, so keep up the good work

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