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The wrong bus It was a lovely day when my friend and I were waiting for the bus to arrive.We were really excited because we were going to spend the day in the south of the island strolling along the seaside promenade. Fives minutes later, we got on the first bus we saw and we were expected to be listening to music for one and a half hour until we arrived at our destination. But, we got totally shocked when we realized that the last stop wasn't the one we wanted to get out so the bus wasn't the right.Therefore, as we didn't want to come back home without having fun on such a sunny day, we decided to discover the place where the bus had left us. Fortunately, we had a fulfilling experience in that wonderful new city we hadn't been before.

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The wrong bus

It was a lovely day when my friend and I were waited for the bus to arrive. We were really excited because we were going to spend the day on the south of the island, strolling along the seaside promenade. Fives minutes later, we got on the first bus we saw and we were expected to be listening to music for one an hour and a half hour until we arrived at our destination. But, We got were totally shocked when we realized that the last stop wasn't the one we wanted; it was the wrong bus to get out so the bus wasn't the right.Therefore, As we didn't want to come back return home without having fun on such a sunny day, we decided to discover explore the place where the bus had left us. Fortunately, we had a fulfilling experience in that wonderful new city we hadn't been to before.
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Great! I am wondering replacing "were expected to be listening" by "were expected to listen" is OK or not.

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