My life will go on.
Yesterday I had a really bad day, when I woke up I felt really bad, I wasn't hungry so didn't have breakfast, I had to study but I culdn't, after a while my boyfriend called me, ha said that he wanted to break up with me, because our relationship didn't work out, and he didn't love me anymore.
I didn't know how react to that notice, I didn't aspect anything like this, I started to see everything around me dark, I started to fell miserable, I started to think how wrong am I.
I also realised that everything has an end, and every end has its beginning, it will be hard for me know to remove all the good memories that I have with him, it will be hard to go ahead and forget the past, but I want do it, I have to be strong.
Everything happens to you isn't meaningless.
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Yesterday I had a really bad day, when I woke up I felt really bad, I wasn't hungry so didn't have breakfast, I had to study but I couldn't, after a while my boyfriend called me, ha said that he wanted to break up with me, because our relationship didn't work out, and he didn't love me anymore. I didn't know how react to that notice. I didn't face anything like that before. I started to see everything around me dark(what?). I felt miserable, so I started to think how wrong was I. I also realised that everything has an end, and every end has its beginning. Now it will be hard for me to forget all the good memories connected to him. It will be hard to go ahead and forget the past, but I want to do it, I have to be strong. Every bad thing which happens to you isn't meaningless.
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My life will go on.
Yesterday I had a really bad day. When I woke up I felt really bad, I wasn't hungry so didn't have breakfast. I had to study but I couldn't. After a while my boyfriend called me; he said that he wanted to break up with me, because our relationship wasn't working didn't work out, and he didn't love me anymore.I didn't know how to react to that information. notice, I didn't expect aspect anything like this. Everything around me became dark.I started to see everything around me dark, I started to feel fell miserable, I started to think how wrong I am I.
I also realised that everything has an end, and every end has a its beginning. It will be hard for me know to remove all the good memories that I have of with him, and it will be hard to go forward ahead and forget the past, but I want do it, I have to be strong.
Everything that happens has a reason./ Everything that happens, happens for a reason. to you isn't meaningless.
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My life will go on.
Yesterday was a really bad day. When I woke up I felt really bad, I wasn't hungry so didn't breakfast. I had to study but I couldn't. After a while my boyfriend called me, and said that he wanted to break up with me because our relationship was not working out, and he didn't love me anymore.I didn't know how react to that. I didn't expect anything like it, and I started to see everything dark around me, I started to feel miserable, I started to think how wrong I am.
I also realised that everything has an end, and every end has a beginning. It will be hard for me to remove all our good memories together. It will be hard to go ahead and forget the past, but I want to do it. I have to be strong.
Nothing that happens to you is meaningless.
very well written!
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I can see you've already had some great corrections Amelie. So I just wanted to send you a comment to say you will get through this and become a stronger and happier person :) Love can be tough, but even if it doesn't last, it was worth it. All the best from London! Caroline.
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