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Zoos
There are a lot of zoos all over the world. The reason most zoos are in bigger cities is more people visit such places and buy tickets so a management can pay workers and provide food for animals. Zoos don’t usually generate lots of money that’s why I think many zoos are placed in big cities to not run down. If you visit mentioned places you can see a lot of spiecies of animals, from big elephants to small birds. Many opinions is stated about zoos. Some people think they shouldn’t exist, some doesn’t matter and some would love to visit such places on daily basis.
If animals are not in their natural environment they don’t feel very comfortable, a space in zoos is not enough for them even it resemble normal world. We shouldn’t compare people to animals but try to imagine people living in closed, small rage like in prison. Those have smaller brains but looking at the grimace of their faces you won’t see feeling of freedom.
We all know we rather can’t remove zoos from the world but we can look after most places, send inspector to see if animals are treated with consideration. People are curious of the world and if they want to see new species of animals, those of which will be carry from other countries anyway.
In my opinion zoos shouldn’t exist but if animals are treated properly, and the workers of the zoos and other people respect their rights and don’t make their sad life worse, some rare species that are not seen in environment and are being showed may be put in to reveal the truth from pictures. -- I mean, somebody has been watching elephant only on the picture and now can see it in reality. (this last sentence was very long, I hope you understood the message)
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Hi, I'm looking for someone who'd like to help correct my mistakes in below essay.
ZoosThere are a lot of zoos all over the world. The reason most zoos are in bigger cities is that more people visit such places and buy tickets, therefore a management can pay workers and provide food for animals. Zoos don’t usually generate lots of money, and I think many zoos are placed in big cities so that they don't go under*. If you visit the aforementioned places, you can see many species of animals, from big elephants to small birds. Many opinions are stated about zoos. Some people think they shouldn’t exist, to some it doesn’t matter, and some would love to visit such places on daily basis.
If animals are not in their natural environment, they don’t feel very comfortable, and space in zoos is not enough for them, even if it resembles the natural world. We shouldn’t compare people to animals, but try to imagine people living in closed, small cage, like in prison. Those animals have smaller brains, but looking at the grimace of their faces you won’t see the feeling of freedom.
We all know we really can’t remove zoos from the world, but we can monitor most of these places, and send inspectors to see if the animals are treated with consideration. People are curious about the world, and they want to see new species of animals which come from other countries.
In my opinion, zoos shouldn’t exist. However, if the animals are treated properly, and the workers of the zoos, and other people, respect their rights and don’t make their sad lives worse, then some rare species that are not seen in the surrounding environment may be viewed in reality, rather than only in pictures. and are being showed may be put in to reveal the truth from pictures. -- What I mean to say is, that somebody who has only seen a picture of an elephant can now see one in reality. (this last sentence was very long, I hope you understood the message)
*go under = go out of business, get run down, run out of money
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