Email about a disease
Dear sister!
How are you doing? Hope you are fine. Sorry for not replying to your emails, I know you worried so much about me , but I had been a little bit under the weather. I had got a terrible cold. You know, the weather is changeable, sometimes it is hot, sometimes it is cool. That makes me have colds frequently. It is horrible, I have got strong headache and I am coughing and sneezing at all times, even having high temperature. I felt badly and I only wanted to sleep and rest. Thank Goodness, paracetamol exists. When I take paracetamol, I have a speedy recovery. I think paracetamol is better than ibuprofen.
Anyway the spring is coming and sooner than later the good weather will come back, fortunately. I hate cold.
Well, I have to go.
Hope things are good with you
Take care
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Email about a disease
Dear sister!How are you doing? Hope you are fine. Sorry for not replying to your emails, I know you were worrying about me , but I have been a little bit under the weather. I had a terrible cold. You know, the weather is changeable, sometimes it is hot, sometimes it is cool. That makes me catch the cold more frequently. It is horrible, I have got a strong headache and I am coughing and sneezing all the time, I even have high temperature. I felt poorly and I only wanted to sleep and rest. Thank goodness paracetamol exists. When I take paracetamol, I have a speedy recovery. I think paracetamol is better than ibuprofen.
Anyway the spring is coming and sooner or later the good weather will come/be back, fortunately. I hate the cold.
Well, I have to go.
Hope things are good with you
Take care
Good job!
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Email about a disease
Dear sister!How are you doing? Hope you are fine. Sorry for not replying to your emails, I know you worried so much about me , but I had been a little bit under the weather. I had got a terrible cold. You know, the weather is changeable, sometimes it is hot, sometimes it is cool. That makes me have colds frequently. It is horrible, I have got strong headache and I am coughing and sneezing at all times, even having high temperature. I felt badly and I only wanted to sleep and rest. Thank Goodness, paracetamol exists. When I take paracetamol, I have a speedy recovery. I think paracetamol is better than ibuprofen.
Anyway the spring is coming and sooner than later the good weather will come back, fortunately. I hate cold.
Well, I have to go.
Hope things are good with you
Take care
Hi Antonio, This is not really a correction, just the way I would say the same thing.
Hi Sister
How are you doing? I hope you are well. Sorry for not replying to your emails. I know you worry about me so much, but I had been a little bit under the weather. I had such a terrible cold. The weather is so changeable, sometimes hot, sometimes cold. This causes me to frequently get colds. It's horrible, I get such a strong headaches and I'm coughing and sneezing all the time, and having a high temperature. I felt so bad that I just wanted to sleep and rest. Thank goodness paracetamol exists. Anytime I take paracetamol I have a speedy recovery. I think paracetamol is better that ibuprofen. Anyway the spring is coming and sooner or later the good weather will return, thanks be to God / thank goodness, because I really hate the cold. Well I have to go. Hope things are good with you. Take care.
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Email about a disease
Dear sister!How are you doing? Hope you are fine. Sorry for not replying to your emails, I know you worried so much about me , but I had been a little bit under the weather. I had got a terrible cold. You know, the weather is changeable, sometimes it is hot, sometimes it is cool. That makes me have colds frequently. It is horrible, I have got strong headache and I am coughing and sneezing at all times, even having a high temperature. I felt badly and I only wanted to sleep and rest. Thank Goodness paracetamol exists. When I take paracetamol, I have a speedy recovery. I think paracetamol is better than ibuprofen.
Anyway the spring is coming and sooner than later the good weather will come back, fortunately. I hate cold.
Well, I have to go.
Hope things are good with you
Take care
This was really good! You only one little A.
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