These days I quitted my job recently because of moving to the UK. When I was working, I couldn't see the sun shine especially during a winter, because I departed my home early and left my work place l

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These days I quitted my job recently because of moving to the UK. When I was working, I couldn't see the sun shine especially during a winter, because I departed my home early and left my work place late. Now I can go out anywhere, anytime that I like with taking the brightly sun shine. It seems nothing special, but for me, it's really happy thing. I enjoy doing that I couldn't do in woking days. To breach my hear, do my nails, walking around in a day time, and etc... I'm really excited everyday like "What can I do today!". Living in the UK would not always be fun, so I'll enjoy and relax the rest of the days in Japan.

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These days

I quitted (<--"Quit" is already in past tense.) my job recently because of I am moving to the UK.

When I was working, I couldn't see the sunshine, especially during a winter because I departed my home early and left my work place late. Now, I can go out anywhere, anytime that I like with taking and take in the brightly (<--"Brightly" is an adverb. "Bright" is an adjective.) sunshine. It may seems like nothing special, but for me, it's a really happy thing event. (<--Try to never use the word "thing" when writing. It's very vague and unclear.)

I enjoy doing that what I couldn't do in during my working days: To bleaching (<--"Bleach" = 漂白する. "Breach" = 違反.) my hear hair, (<--"Hear" = 聞く. "Hair" = 髪.) doing my nails, walking around in a the day time, and etc. I'm really excited every day, like thinking, "What can I do today?"

Living in the UK would will not always be fun, so I'll enjoy and relax for the rest of the my remaining days in Japan.

Enjoy these last few days, Koto! =)

These days

I quitted my job recently because of moving to the UK.
When I was working, I couldn't see the sun shine, especially during a winter, this was because I departed departed my home early and left my work place late. Now I can go out anywhere, anytime that I like with while taking in the brightly sun shine. It seems nothing special, but for me, it's really happy thing.

I enjoy doing things that I couldn't do in when I was working. To bleach my hear, do my nails, walking around in a the day time, and etc... Everyday, I'm really excited like that I ask myself with such excitement "What can I do today?!".

Living in the UK would was not always be fun, so I'll enjoy and relax for the rest of the my days in Japan.

Notes:

- No need to place an "and" before etc. Et means and, so therefore its redundant. If you used the synonym "so forth (or so on)" then you would add "and" for example "He loves watching horror movies, romantic comedies, documentaries and so forth (or and so on).

- Living in the UK would was not always be fun, so I'll enjoy and relax for the rest of the my days in Japan. I am not sure if here you are meaning to say that you will now stay in Japan forever or while you are in Japan, as in visiting Japan?

These days

I quitted my job recently because of moving to the UK. (If the move is not yet done, use

"I am moving to the UK")

Correction: I quitted my job recently because I am moving to the UK.

I believe the past tense of "quit" should be "quitted" (from British English) but it might be different for American English (although I believe "quit" is not the most common form used).

When I was working, I couldn't see the sun shine especially during a (the) winter, because I departed my (from) home early and left my work place late. Now I can go out anywhere, anytime that I like with taking the brightly sun shine (while looking at the bright sun). It (may) seems that it is nothing special, but for me, it's (a) really happy thing.

I enjoy doing that (what) I couldn't do in during wo(r)king days. To breach my hear (brush my hair), do my nails, walking around in a during day time, and etc... I'm really excited everyday like "What can I do today!". (Everyday, I am really excited and ask myself the things that I can do today.)

Living in the UK would not always be fun, so I'll enjoy and relax the rest of the days (with the remaining time I have) in Japan.

These days

I quit my job recently because I am moving to the UK.
While I was working, I couldn't see the sunshine, especially during a winter, because I left home early and stayed late at my workplace. (or stayed late at the office). Now I can go out anywhere, anytime that I like and take in the bright sunshine. It seems like nothing special, but for me, it's a really happy thing.

I enjoy doing things that I couldn't do while I was working. To brush my hair, do my nails, walking around during the day etc... I'm really excited every day, like "What can I do today!".

Living in the UK would not always be fun, so I'll enjoy myself and relax the rest of the time I have in Japan.

Well done Koto Good luck with your new career in the UK.

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