The life of a woman today
Everybody will be totally agree with me if I say that women have obtained many privileges that one hundred years ago seem impossible to have.
But before a woman was brought up to be a good mother and a housewife (homemaker) and I think her life was much more quiet than today.
Nowadays, I don’t know if society, the media, men or women themselves ask a lot of things to women to be perfect.
Women should have a job, be mother, have time to bring up her children, be fit and beautiful, be a good cook, drive a car and so on.
Sometimes I think that there aren’t hours in the day to do all these things and do them well.
I’m a perfectionist person and in a moment of my life I tried to be all these things but I’m sorry I’m fed up with the situation.
Fortunately some of us have a man who share the housework and this is a very important thing. Men have a very important role at home in these days to life of both of them get better.
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The life of a woman today
Everybody will totally agree with me if I say that women have obtained many privileges that one hundred years ago would have seemed impossible.Thosedays, a woman was brought up to be a good mother and a housewife (homemaker) and I think her life was much more quiet than today.
Nowadays, I don’t know if society, the media, or men and women themselves, ask too much of women.
Woman should have a job, be a mother, have time to bring up her children, be fit and beautiful, be a good cook, drive a car and so on.
Sometimes I think that there aren’t enough hours in the day to do all these things and to do them well.
I’m a perfectionist and once I tried to be all these things but I’m sorry; I became fed up with the situation.
Fortunately some of us have a man who share the housework and this is a very important thing. Men have a very important role at home these days and the life of both men and women has become better.
Very well written!
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