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Sentence(please) Hi, there Which options would you use in this sentence? "These are laws available to all society, laws which/that should not allow any kinds of violations of rights/rights violations, neither political, nor civil or human rights in general." or "These are laws available to all society, laws which/that should not allow any kinds of violations of rights/rights violation, not political, not civil and not human rights either." Please.

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Hi, there

Which options would you use in this sentence? "These are laws available to all society, laws which/that should not allow any kinds of violations of rights/rights violations, neither political, nor civil nor human rights in general."
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"These are laws available to all society, laws which/that should not allow any kinds of violations of rights/rights violation, not political, not civil and not human rights either."

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"These are laws available to all society, laws which should not allow any kinds of rights violation, neither political, nor civil nor human rights in general." 



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Hi, there Which options would you use in this sentence? "1These are general laws applicable to all society, laws forbidding any violation of rights*, whether they be political, or civil or human rights." or 2"These are laws available to all society, laws that should forbid any kind* of violations of rights; either political or civil or human rights." *maybe there is some use for 'any kind of' here, but I cannot see that it adds anything to the clarification that follows. Personally, I would omit it. Very well written!

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