I tried to correct it. Won't allow me to submit the corrections and strike outs. :( Just copied and pasted. Hope it helps..... When you become an adult elder you want more want to be independence. When you start to earn money you can provide for yourself. At this point you have to choose between a highly paid job and an interesting job which brings you joy. In my opinion the best option is to combine a highly paid job with a and pleasant job. , bBut it's not easy. Your at first job choice may of your job has to depend on your lifestyle. If you have a difficult financial situation or debts, the best choice way will be to find a highly paid job. But if you have enough money and and you are interested in self employment development, you may want to choose will find a job which brings you joy. Secondly not all people need a lot of money. Some feels better when they have enough money to live for living but not more. But the best way is it's when when you do your hobby and get paid for it. when i find a job I'll look for an draw attention to interesting job, because my parents will help financially. and and i will be able to begin to focus on what I am truly passionate about. develop in interesting for me sphere. I asked my friend and she said, : "Just find a hobby and you won't need an interesting job. Do your favorite things at home and earn money at the job." Maybe she is right. Some people Somebody think things that if you have a lot of money you will be happy, but I don't think so and believe that money is it's not the most important main part of our lives. life. Finally i want to say that an eventful and happy happiness life depends on your job and if you want to be content with your life choose an interesting job.