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Shefali chiu
An exhausted day It is totally exhausted day, I am too sleepy to write, but i must to write something to keep it successive. and that is all.

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An Exhausting Day

It has been a totally exhausting day! I am too sleepy to write anything of substance, but I must post something here merely to keep it (my streak) successive. So, this is it!*

Hi Shefali! Good job! Whatever changes that I've made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.

*I used "has been" because I understood that you were writing this at the end of the day, so it is still on-going, or, in the present. You would use "was" when it is in the simple past, it is done and over with, as in reference to yesterday (i.e. Yesterday was a totally exhausting day!)  P.S. The pronoun "I" is always capitalized, not just when you use it to start the sentence, unlike other pronouns "he" and "she."


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An exhaustive day

It was a really exhaustive day, I am too sleepy to write but I must write something to keep it successful. And that is all.

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