Co-working spaces
I'm actually having an internet connection problem for quite a while in my home. It's not stable at all. it comes for an hour and become disconnected for hours. One of my new year's resolutions is to improve my English fluency in the first 3 months. and having a weak internet connection deprived me of actually watching online videos about learning English. Today I decided to go and study English at a co-working place. I thought that it's gonna be a quiet place. but it wasn't all it was cracked up to be. I found out that there were some people shouting at each other. They were actually kind of teasing with each other but that actually was really annoying for me especially that was my first time to go to this place so I didn't expect that at all. But what went well and make me feel that it was well worth opportunity to try was that I felt that I studied more than I might study if I was sitting at home. And I think that has something to do with co-working space vibe. It's actually a vibe that makes you feel that you're here to work. or to do a certain thing. so you try as much as possible to make the most of this opportunity of having a good internet connection and exploit your time in a more efficient way. The experience wasn't bad I feel like I may try it again if internet stays as it is especially that this co-working space was really affordable and I also felt like its vibe has raised my productivity level.
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Co-working spaces
I've been having an internet connection problem for quite a while in my home. It's not stable at all. it comes and goes - it will work for an hour and then disconnect for hours. One of my new year's resolutions is to improve my English fluency in the first 3 months. and having a weak internet connection deprives me of watching online videos about learning English. Today I decided to go and study English at a co-working place. I thought that it's gonna be a quiet place. but it wasn't all it was cracked up to be. I found there were some people shouting at each other. They were actually kind of teasing each other but that actually was really annoying for me especially for first time to go to this place. I didn't expect that at all. But what went well and made me feel that it was well worth the opportunity to try was that I felt that I studied more than I might have studied if I was sitting at home. And I think that has something to do with co-working space vibe. It's actually a vibe that makes you feel that you're here to work. or to do a certain thing. so you try as much as possible to make the most of the opportunity of having a good internet connection and exploit your time in a more efficient way. The experience wasn't bad. I feel like I may try it again if the internet stays as it is, especially given that this co-working space was really affordable ,and I also felt like its vibe has raised my productivity level.Notes:
- That's all pretty good, expect that you're using "actually" a bit too often. I don't know anything about Arabic, but I know that in French 'actuallement", which look like the English "actually" has a different sense. In French it means "at this moment", whereas "actually" in English is used to i) emphasise that something is really happening or ii) to show surprise that something unexpected happens (I though I'd hate the party but actually I had a great time.)
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Co-working spaces
I'm actually having an internet connection problem for quite a while in my home. It's not stable at all. It comes for an hour and becomes disconnected for hours. One of my new year's resolutions is to improve my English fluency in the first 3 months, and having a weak internet connection deprived me of actually watching online videos about learning English. Today I decided to go and study English at a co-working place (We don't normally use this phrase in English - is this like a library?). I thought that it would be a quiet place, but it wasn't all it was cracked up to be. I found out that There were some people shouting at each other. They were actually kind of teasing with each other and that actually was really annoying for me, especially since this was my first time going to this place so I didn't expect that at all. But what went well and made me feel that it was a worthwhile opportunity to try was that I felt that I studied more than I might study if I was sitting at home. And I think that has something to do with the co-working space vibe. It's actually a vibe that makes you feel that you're here to work or to do a certain thing, so you try as much as possible to make the most of this opportunity of having a good internet connection and exploit your time in a more efficient way. The experience wasn't bad - I feel like I may try it again if the internet stays as it is, especially since this co-working space was really affordable and I also felt like its vibe has raised my productivity level.---
Great writing Omar! I agree with you, I go to the library a lot here to study and I definitely feel more productive.
I changed some words and added some punctuation to make it sound more natural. Watch out for punctuation in English, it is very important to use it properly to separate ideas in your writing.
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