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would like this text tobe grammatically correct, was written ina spokenEnglish Thanksforcorrections. My name is Kate. I'm 26 y.o. I was born in Kashira, Moscow Region. I live in Moscow now, renting a flat with my sister. I live far from Sheremetjevo Airport. I leave 2 hours before the turnout. Before I left for 3 hours, but I bought a travel ticket for Aeroexpress and it saves my time considerally. This travel ticket costs 9000 Rubles and it’s calculated for 50 trips. In my opinion it’s very profitable. Many people ask me why I will not move closer to the airport for example to Khimki or Lobnja. There are a number of reasons for this. Firstly, I have been living in this apartment for more than two years. I like this apartment and a apartment owner. Secondly I like living in Moscow, I like that I can quickly get to the center and I don’t need to stand in Traffic jams. If I will look for another apartment, I want to live in the north of Moscow. I would like to say a few words about my Family. My parents are divorced. My mother is 44 y.o., she works as a pharmacist. She is very strong and punchy woman. She recently got a driving license and drives herself. For her it’s achievement because she was very afraid to drive herself. I dream to take her to rest to the sea, for example the Maldives. I think soon my dream will come true, since now I have mile tickets. I don’t communicate with my dad. My sister is 24 y.o. As I said we live together in Moscow, she works as an engineer in a construction Company and studies in a magistracy.I graduated from the Moscow State Regional Social Humanitarian Institute specializing in Teacher of German in 2014. I studied at the university also, worked in a school as a teacher of German. After university I decided to go to Germany again. I packed my bags to go and work as Au-pair. I went to live with a family in Paderborn taking care of three children and I learned all about Germany and its culture. It was the most amazing adventure and Experience. At that time I travelled a lot on a shoestring budget. But I visited a lot of countries. I spent a night at a train station in Amsterdam, participated in a demonstration in Paris, celebrated the New Year in Rome with the people I met on the bus on the way from Munich to Rome, walked all over Berlin on foot., danced Salsa in Spain, spent the night in a tent on the shore on the northern sea in Holand. I understand now that this was the best time in my life. Besides, I began to communicate fluent in German, met very good people.

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I would like this text to be grammatically correct, it was written in spoken English Thanks for the corrections.

My name is Kate. I'm 26 y.o. and I was born in Kashira, Moscow Region. I live in Moscow now, renting a flat with my sister. I live far from Sheremetjevo Airport. I leave 2 hours before the turnout. Before I left for 3 hours, but I bought a travel ticket for Aeroexpress and it saves me considerable time. This travel ticket costs 9000 Rubles and it’s calculated for 50 trips. In my opinion it’s very profitable. Many people ask me why I will not move closer to the airport for example to Khimki or Lobnja. There are a number of reasons for this. Firstly, I have been living in this apartment for more than two years. I like this apartment and the landlord. Secondly I like living in Moscow, I like that I can quickly get to the center and I don’t need to sit in traffic jams. If I look for another apartment, I want to live in the north of Moscow. I would like to say a few words about my family. My parents are divorced. My mother is 44 y.o., she works as a pharmacist. She is a very strong and punchy woman. She recently got a driving license and drives herself. For her it’s achievement because she was very afraid to drive herself. I dream of taking her to rest by the sea, for example the Maldives. I think soon my dream will come true, since now I have mile tickets. I don’t communicate with my dad. My sister is 24 y.o. As I said we live together in Moscow, she works as an engineer in a construction Company and studies in a magistracy.I graduated from the Moscow State Regional Social Humanitarian Institute specializing in teaching German in 2014. I studied at the university also, worked in a school teaching German. After university I decided to go to Germany again. I packed my bags to go and work as an au-pair. I went to live with a family in Paderborn taking care of three children and I learned all about Germany and its culture. It was the most amazing adventure and experience. At that time I travelled a lot on a shoestring budget. But I visited a lot of countries. I spent a night at a train station in Amsterdam, participated in a demonstration in Paris, celebrated the New Year in Rome with the people I met on the bus on the way from Munich to Rome, walked all over Berlin on foot., danced Salsa in Spain, and spent the night in a tent on the shore of the northern sea in Holand. I now understand that this was the best time in my life. Besides, I began to communicate fluent in German and I met very good people.
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would like this text tobe grammatically correct, was written ina spokenEnglish Thanksforcorrections.

My name is Kate. I'm 26 years old. I was born in the Kashira, Moscow Region. I live in Moscow now, and am renting a flat with my sister. I live far from Sheremetjevo Airport. I leave 2 hours before the turnout (what is "turnout"? Possibly "boarding"?). Before I left 3 hours early, but I bought a travel ticket for Aeroexpress and it saves my time considerally. This travel ticket costs 9000 Rubles and it can be used for 50 trips. In my opinion it’s very profitable. Many people ask me why I will not move closer to the airport, for example to Khimki or Lobnja. There are a number of reasons for this. Firstly, I have been living in this apartment for more than two years. I like this apartment and a the apartment owner. Secondly I like living in Moscow. I like that I can quickly get to the center of town and I don’t need to stand sit in traffic jams. If I will looked for another apartment, I would like to live in the north part of Moscow. I would like to say a few words about my family. My parents are divorced. My mother is 44 y.o years old, and she works as a pharmacist. She is a very strong and punchy (?) woman. She recently got a driver's license and drives herself. For her it’s an achievement because she was very afraid to drive herself. I dream  of taking her to rest to relax by the sea, for example, in the Maldives. I think soon my dream will come true soon, since now I have mile tickets. I don’t communicate with my dad. My sister is 24 years old. As I said we live together in Moscow. She works as an engineer in a construction company and studies in a magistracy.I graduated from the Moscow State Regional Social Humanitarian Institute specializing in Teacher of teaching German in 2014. I studied at the university also, worked in a school as a German teacher of German. After university I decided to go to Germany again. I packed my bags to go and work as an Au-pair. I went to live with a family in Paderborn, taking care of three children and I learned all about Germany and its culture. It was the most amazing adventure and experience. At that time I travelled a lot on a shoestring budget. But I visited a lot of countries. I spent a night at a train station in Amsterdam, participated in a demonstration in Paris, celebrated the New Year in Rome with the people I met on the bus on the way from Munich to Rome, walked all over Berlin on foot., danced the salsa in Spain, spent the night in a tent on the shore on the northern sea in Holand. I understand now that this was the best time in my life. Besides, I began to communicate fluently in German, and I met very good people.
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Holland is with ll :D I think you will be traveling around the world! Excellent English! Good luck! Just for the record, it would nice for the readers if you could write in paragraphs, perhaps also for your own study too?

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