1/24 diary (please improve)

Today was a very hard day because I had to stand outside the entire day.

After about 9 hours, I stood at the entrance to my office.

I was completely frozen frosted.     "frosted"is creative but frozen is more natural

But, one kind customer gave me a steamed meat bun.  It was very delicious and made me warm.

Although my boss told me to go home by walking, the distances from my work place to my home is so long that I took a taxi! also today!

I think I will exhaust my savings of money if it will keeps snowing everyday....

1/24 diary (please improve)

Today is so was a really hard day, because I had to stand outside for the whole day.

About 9hours I kept standing I stood at the entrance of my office for about nine hours.

I complately frosted.  I was frozen!

But oOne kind customer gave me a steamed meat bun, it was very delicious and warmed me up. made me warm.

Although my boss told me to walk home, it I was too far so I took a taxi.go home by walking, The distances from my work place to my home are so long that I took taxi also today!

I think I would will exhausted my savings of money if it will keeps snowing everyday....