my dream !
Hi! my name is Mário,I'm from Brazil,i thing that i geting the fluence easy,but of course i do some mistakes....
well,i need you all detect something wrong here.. COF !! COF!!
today i dream,my dream was about buy a house and biuld a family.
i were in the bank to finance the house,a small house to me,my wife and one son/daughter .
on the bank the woman said that i need to do give to them $25,000 to entrance and finance the rest on 40 times of $500 .
my wife told me that this is amazing,great price !,but i want a biggest house,because i wanna one more children,and we discuted about that and we get a deal,we will buy our own land and buy the materials to do a big house with 5 rooms and two floors and a basement.
(was a real dream)
god bless you all !
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Hi! my name is Mário,I'm from Brazil,i thing that gaining fluency is easy,but of course i do make some mistakes.... well,i need you all detect something wrong here.. COF !! COF!! today (you can either say i had a dream or i dreamt),my dream was about buying a house and building a family (usually said as starting a family). i was in the bank to finance the house,a small house for my wife, one son or daughter, and me. Inside the bank the woman said that i need to give them $25,000 to entrance and finance the rest on 40 times of $500 . my wife told me that this is amazing, and a great price,but i wanted a bigger house,because i want one more child,and we disputed about that and we got a deal,we will buy our own land and buy the materials to build a big house with 5 rooms, two floors, and a basement. (This was a real dream) god bless you all(So cute thank you!)!
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Hi! my name is Mário I'm from Brazil i thing that i geting the fluence easy,but of course i do some mistakes....
well,i need you all detect something wrong here.. COF !! COF!!
today i dream,my dream was about buy a house and biuld a family.
i were in the bank to finance the house,a small house to me,my wife and one son/daughter .
on the bank the woman said that i need to do give to them $25,000 to entrance and finance the rest on 40 times of $500 .
my wife told me that this is amazing,great price !,but i want a biggest house,because i wanna one more children,and we discuted about that and we get a deal,we will buy our own land and buy the materials to do a big house with 5 rooms and two floors and a basement.
(was a real dream)
god bless you all !
well,i need you all detect something wrong here.. COF !! COF!!
today i dream,my dream was about buy a house and biuld a family.
i were in the bank to finance the house,a small house to me,my wife and one son/daughter .
on the bank the woman said that i need to do give to them $25,000 to entrance and finance the rest on 40 times of $500 .
my wife told me that this is amazing,great price !,but i want a biggest house,because i wanna one more children,and we discuted about that and we get a deal,we will buy our own land and buy the materials to do a big house with 5 rooms and two floors and a basement.
(was a real dream)
god bless you all !
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