Could you please give some recommendation for better sentences The book is very well known throughout the World. I had heard so many comments about it before buying the book. When I started reading it

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Could you please give some recommendation for better sentences The book is very well known throughout the World. I had heard so many comments about it before buying the book. When I started reading it, I understand the meaning of interests towards it. Because, this book is not a book which supports readers with ordinary personal development training, but also it can be a great guide for all of us. Therefore, people should not throw it an edge. On the contrary, they should read again and again this book in a determinate time period. Because, you can easily notice that, the book will give you new significant feeds for your mind. You will never feel that you are reading a same book at each time. This feature makes it magical and inspiring in people’s minds. Author puts forward an ambitious idea that everyone can be a person who is they want to be. But, there is just a one condition they must believe their desires. The author illustrates special steps. Although he uses soft language, he doesn’t give directly the main idea and bridges of all parts in the book. He believes readers should think and internalize each step in detail. Because of this aim, he would choose mostly cloudy expression. This book has a huge impact on me. I really decided great chances in my life and my mind. Also, I saw that all the comments I had heard are not exaggeration. If you are believing the power of the intense energy of a person, you will be great and special directions in this book. Good Reading!

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The book* is very well known throughout the world and I had heard so many good/positive comments about it before buying it. When I started reading it, I easily understood the reasons behind the interests towards it. This book is not only one which instructs those readers who are interested in personal development training, but also it is a great guide for us all.

Therefore, people should not throw it a shelf after reading it. On the contrary, they should read this book again and again and within an indefinite time period because you will easily notice that the book will provide you with new and significant ideas for your mind to process. You will never feel that you are reading the same book every time. This feature makes it magical and inspiring in many people’s minds.

The author puts forward the ambitious idea that everyone can be the person that they want to be, but there is just a one condition--they must sincerely believe in their desires. The author then illustrates doing this by using special, yet, simple-to-follow steps. Although he uses simple language, he doesn’t directly give the reader the main idea, but instead links it to all parts of the book. He believes readers should think and internalize each step in detail. Because of this goal, he chooses to use mostly generalized, if not vague, expressions.

This book has had a huge impact on me. I really noticed great chances in my life and in my way of thinking. Also, I realized that all of the comments that I had heard about it were not exaggerations. If you believe in the power of the intense inner energy of a person, you will be grateful for the beneficial instructions provided in this book. Good reading!

Hi Aysegul. Good job! Whatever changes that I have made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. Apologies if I’ve misinterpreted your ideas! I hope this helps you. J.

*It would have been nice to know the name of the book, no?

Could you please give some recommendation for better sentences

The book is very well known throughout the world. I had heard so many comments about it before buying the book. When I started reading it, I understood the interest in it. Because, this book is not only a book which supports readers with ordinary personal development training, but also it can be a great guide for all of us. Therefore, people should not throw it an edge.DONT UNDERSTAND THE PREVIOUS SENTENCE On the contrary, they should read it again and again in a set time period. Because, you can easily notice that the book will give you new significant ideas. You will never feel that you are reading the same book each time. This feature makes it magical and inspiring in people’s minds.
The author puts forward an ambitious idea that everyone can be the person they want to be. But, there is just one condition: they must believe their desires.
The author describes the steps. Although he uses soft language, he doesn’t directly give the main idea and bridges(WHAT ARE BRIDGES HERE?) of all parts in the book. He believes readers should think and internalize each step in detail. Because of this aim, he chooses mostly vague expressions.
This book has a huge impact on me. I really decided great changes in my life and my mind. Also, I saw that all the comments I had heard are not an exaggeration. If you believe the power of the intense energy of a person, you will greatly benefit from this book. Good Reading!

I understood The book doesn't support but it can be There are some other mistakes but don't worry , all of us learn from our mistakes.

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