Traveling to the U.S.

Hi folks, it's good to be back here writing to you. Today's subject for my notebook is my thoughts/comments about my next trip: New York City! I'm so excited about the journey that I can't stop thinking about the numerous kinds of activities to do in "The City That Never Sleeps." I'll be traveling with my wife and we're planning to "live" in NYC for 20 days. It will be a cultural immersion trip. We aren't planning to shop for a lot of electronics or walk through all the outlets that will be available. Instead, our intention is to spend that time as "locals" by buying our own food, cooking at home, and leisurely visiting the places that the locals enjoy. Of course, we'll also be saving some time to see the more famous places within the city like the Statue of Liberty, Central Park, Times Square (just for a few minutes), the Empire State Building, etc. So, if you are a NYC resident, please feel free to suggest to me some other nice places to go!

Hi Daniel. Good job! Whatever changes I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. Yes, NYC is a great city to visit! Be sure to see Chinatown, the “Bull” on Wall Street, and the 9-11 Memorial. Check out "The City That Never Sleeps" on Facebook, too!  Best of luck and enjoy your trip! I hope that this helps you. J.

The word “uncountless” does not exist, it is better to use “countless” or “uncountable” or even “numerous” as I have done. Personally, I find the word “stuff” to be a lazy word as whatever you want to describe can be described much better with “things” or  whatever it actually is (use examples). Also, it includes both the singular and the plural, so please, no “stuffs.”  In AmEng, “tripping” means high on drugs or mentally spacing out due to exhaustion, distraction, etc. Either "traveling" or "travelling" is fine, but be consistent in usage. Finally, pay attention to your spelling and sentence construction, but overall, know that you write at a higher level.