You need to pay attention to your punctuation mark spacing!  no spaces before commas and fullstops.  One space after a comma and two after a full period.  NO space before colon (':') and one space after it.  See how I leave spaces for the parenthesis before the quotes.  Even if your piece is grammatically correct, it is worthless.

Friendship in my eyes.

Time flies.  As we get older, we find that we have fewer friends.  Not because they have died, but because we have let them die in our hearts.  We don't invest the effort and the personal attention that friendships require.  We collect know many acquaintances along the way but keep kept fewer friends.  When we were children, making friends was easy and natural.  We were emotinonally free then, unafraid to open our hearts and communicate with our feelings and needs.  We didn't keep score regarding who called whom last; We didn't hold on to argumentative wordsthat came out of arguments,but instead forgave readily and completely.

I just want to ask my friends: "Where are you?"

friendship in my eyes

Time flies.As we get older,we find that we have fewer friends.Not because they have died,but because we have let them die in our hearts.We don't invest the effort and the personal attention friends require .We collect many acquaintances along the way,but keep fewer friends .When we were children ,making friends was easy and natural.We were emotinonally free then,unafraid to open our hearts and communicate our feelings and needs.We didn't keep score regarding who called whom last.We didn't hold on to argumentative words,but instead forgave readily and completely.

I just want to ask.my friends,where are you?