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Can you please correct this? Dear Ms Romero, I am writing in reply to your letter concerning the International Sports Event. The sports in which the students wish to take part are basketball and tennis. Besides, quite a few boys have expressed their enthusiasm at the possibility of playing volleyball as well. As to the end time of the event, it could not have been more suitable , since its ending quite early on Sunday evening will allow us to arrive at the bus station on time. As far as accommodation is concerned, I have to inform you that we would prefer to make our own arrangements. Last year, on another occasion, we stayed at a hotel not far from the event in question.Since all the participants were satisfied with the quality of the accommodation , we have, therefore, decided to propose it again. Moreover, I would like you to give me your email address and phone number in case I require further information. Yours sincerely , Cristiana Rosselli

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Hi Christiana,

I think your letter is very good! There is just one small correction that I made. If there's anything else I can help you with, please let me know.


Can you please correct this?

Dear Ms Romero,
I am writing in reply to your letter concerning the International Sports Event. The sports in which the students wish to take part are basketball and tennis. Besides, quite a few boys have expressed their enthusiasm at the possibility of playing volleyball as well.

As to the end time of the event, it could not have been more suitable , since its ending quite early on Sunday evening will allow us to arrive at the bus station on time.

As far as accommodation is concerned, I have to inform you that we would prefer to make our own arrangements. Last year, on another occasion, we stayed at a hotel not far from the event in question.Since all the participants were satisfied with the quality of the accommodation , we have, therefore, decided to propose it again.

Moreover, I would like you to give me your email address and phone number in case I require further information.
Yours sincerely ,
Cristiana Rosselli


I would personally use only one of these since they both mean the same thing and are in the same sentence.

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