Disneyland in New Year The last year I went to Disneyland, Anaheim California. To be more specific the 31st December. I received the new year there, I went with my family. I woke up at 4 am to take a

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Disneyland in New Year The last year I went to Disneyland, Anaheim California. To be more specific the 31st December. I received the new year there, I went with my family. I woke up at 4 am to take a shower, as we are about 10 people we had to woke up earlier to can take a shower and don't loss time. We rent a mini bus to go there, when we arrived to USA I have to cross walking and when i was crossing the line a Police took me in English. The first he asked me was "Where are you going?" I answered well, after that he asked me "How will you get there"?, And I said "What"?, I wasn't very sure that's why I asked him that, and he took me in Spanish, It was very stresseful because I wanted to improve and practice my English, so i asnwered in Spanish and he let me go. After that my family pick me up in the mini bus and we putting on the road to go there. I coudn't sleep, I don't know if that was because i was so excited for that or just because it was unconfortable We arrived earlier at 7 am, so we left the car in the parking and we go to there. My parents had to make line to buy the tickets because we didn't buy them before. They spent about 20 minutes to buy them, after that we go to the line to enter to Disneyland Park. It was awesome, I was very happy because I love Disney and I wanted to practice my English in any place, I got in all rides, some of them like Splash, Space Mountain, Snow Mountain (I don't know the name). When we was making line in Splash my dad didn't want to get in because he was scared so he left the line and he told us that he'd see us later. As everyone knows the food there isn't very good, I bought about 7 turkey legs because we were a lot of people and when I bought these Turkey legs, the mini car that was selling those was closed, because they didn't have more turkey legs After that i was eating my Turkey leg and a person I think he was Chinese and he asked me where i had bought that. And i told him that i had bought it in a mini car and I point the car with my finger, but I Told him that the turkey legs were empty, and he said "Oh its okay" after that i saw that was opened again and I felt very bad for the man. If are there any mistakes correct me please

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Disneyland in the New Year

Last year I went to Disneyland, in Anaheim California, with my family. To be specific, I went on the 31st of December.

That morning, I woke up at 4 am to take a shower. There were about 10 people traveling together, so we had to wake up early so we would arrive on time. We rented a mini bus. When we got to the border I had to walk across. As I crossed the line a policeman asked me questions in English. First he asked, "Where are you going?" After I answered, he asked, "How will you get there"? I asked "What"? I wasn't sure why I asked him that, and he answered me in Spanish. It was very stressful because I wanted to practice my English, but I answered in Spanish and he let me go.
After that my family picked me up in the mini bus and we got back on the road.
I coudn't sleep. I don't know if that was because I was so excited or just because it was uncomfortable.
We arrived earlier than 7 am, so we left the car in the parking and walked to the park.
It was awesome. I was very happy because I love Disneyland and I wanted to practice my English wherever I could. I rode all the rides, including Splash, Space Mountain, and Snow Mountain. When we were standing in line for Splash, my dad was afraid to stand with us, so he left the line and told us he'd see us later.
The food there isn't very good, so I had bought about 7 turkey legs for all of us, but the food truck had closed because they ran out of turkey legs.
Later, as I was eating my turkey leg, a Chinese-looking person asked me where I had bought it. I told him I had bought it in a food truck, and I pointed to the truck, but added that they were out of turkey legs. He said "Oh that's okay." Later, I saw it was open again. I felt very bad for the man.

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