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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Anda, I am a 47 years old woman from Hungary. I live in a village 32 km to Budapest. I have two big sons, they are 22 and 20 years old. I work in Budapest as a bus driver. I like the English language very much, so I started to learn few month since, alone, through Internet courses. I can not speak just wrote a little English, because I don't have partner to exercise it. When I started to learn, first it was just a hobby for me. But already I think so, someday I would like to take an exam from it. If you want to learn Hungarian, let's help each other with language exchange.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Anda, I am a 47 years old woman1 from Hungary. I live in a village 32 km to from Budapest. I have two big sons, they are 22 and 20 years old. I work in Budapest as a bus driver.


I like the English language very much and so I started to learn few months since ago by myself alone, through Internet courses. I cannot2 speak English but I can just wrote write a little English, because I don't have a language partner to exercise itpractise with. When I started to learn, first it was just a hobby for me. But already I think so, that someday I would like to can take an exam from it. If you want to learn Hungarian, let's help each other with for language exchange.

1.  No need to use woman here because we can see your name is female and you have a picture.  It is strange to English readers when we know you clearly that that you are a woman. It is OK when you don't have a picture or your Hungarian is ambiguous in gender recognition.

2.  It is spelt as "cannot" one word and not "can not".  This is a very common mistake that even some native speakers make especially Americans.

I am very impressed at your progress with the English language.  Except for minor mistakes, I can understand you writing very well.  If this is only a few months' work. Think of how great you will progress given a few years' time!  Your sons will be very proud of their mother! :)








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