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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Sheng Huiping ,I come from China . The reason why I learn English is complex.For one part ,English is an internation languege .For another part ,i am intereted in the cultuer of England ,and I want to read some English novels.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Sheng Huiping ,I come from China .
The reason why1 I learn English is complex. For one part thing, English is an international languege language,  .For another part I 2 am intereted interested in the cultuer of England English culture and I want to read some English novels.

1.  It is bad English to use "why" after "reason".  This is redundant because "reason" is the answer to an implicit question being asked.

2,  You must capitalize "i" when referring to yourself regardless where it appears.

Don't leave a space before the comma.  Only one after it.

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