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aAn Oil Painting.
Here is an oil painting about the figure of Buddha created by a graduate. I love to study religion, especially Buddhism, so I really appreciate this work extremely. From this painting, we can feel that the Buddha is very dignified, sacred and mysterious.
An Oil Painting
Here is an oil painting about the figure of depicting Buddha created the Goddess of Mercy1, drawn by a graduate. I love to study religion, especially Buddhism. so I appreciate this work piece extremely immensely. From this painting, we I can feel that the Buddha2 the image is very dignified, sacred and mysterious.
1. I believe it is 觀音 or even 文殊 but definitely not 如來
2. There is no grammatical error but to write well, do not use same words over again and again unless it is for emphasis. Your writing will bore readers if you do.
In my opinion, I agree with you that the composition is very good. However the artist failed to capture the Buddhist nature of the image. It lacks compassion, a core tenent of Buddhism. The depiction may be diginified, sombre and myusterious but also aloof, establishes no connection with the gazer.
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