Communication
Who will be with me? My goal is to participate in a volunteering project where I will work in a creative youth international environment. Thanks to the cooperation of NFM and AFICS, I will get an opportunity to maximally realize this goal, because I will be able to chat with other volunteers from different countries. There are a lot of interesting projects In Salzburg, and that is why communication with other volunteers especially interesting for me, because we can share different experiences of our work.
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Communication
Who will be with me? My goal is to participate in a volunteering project where I will work in a creative youth international environment. Thanks to the cooperation of NFM and AFICS, I will get an opportunity to maximally realize this goal, because I will be able to chat with other volunteers from different countries. There are a lot of interesting projects In Salzburg, and that is why communication with other volunteers especially interesting for me, because we can share different experiences of our work.This is very good but I'm going to change it stylistically. Please note the changes and understand that you can accept or reject the way I would express what are, essentially, your ideas. The use of the future is not wrong, but I think that it would be more natural in the following manner:
Communication
Who is with me? My goal is to participate in a volunteer project where I work in a creative international youth environment. Thanks to the cooperation of NFM and AFICS, I will have the opportunity to achieve this goal to its maximum potential because I will be able to chat with volunteers from different countries. There are many interesting projects in Salzburg and that is why communication with other volunteers is of special interest to me. We can share our different experiences.
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