Weather!
It was sunny in the early morning today.
It is cloudy now.
But it is going to rain in the afternoon according to the weather report.
And tommorow morning, it will be much colder than today.
The temperature might be minus three. It is a unbelievable wether here.
So I should go to shopping right now.
Could you check my writing and make more natural sounding? Thank you!
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Weather!
It was sunny in the early morning today.It is cloudy now.
But it is going to rain in the afternoon according to the weather report.
And tommorow morning, it will be much colder than today.
The temperature might be minus three. It is a unbelievable wether here.
So I should go to shopping right now.
Could you check my writing and make more natural sounding? Thank you!
It was sunny early in the morning today, but it is cloudy now
It is going to rain in the afternoon according to the weather report and they say tomorrow morning will be much colder than today. The temperature may be (as low as) minus three. The weather is unbelievable here, I should probably go shopping now
I remember my teachers say to avoid starting sentences with "And.." or "But.." except for very rare cases. You can use them instead to connect sentences
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It was sunny in the early morning today.
It is cloudy now.
But it is going to rain in the afternoon according to the weather report.
And tommorow morning, it will be much colder than today.
The temperature might be minus three. It is an unbelievable weather here.
So I should go to shopping right now.
Could you check my writing and make more natural sounding? Thank you!
It is cloudy now.
But it is going to rain in the afternoon according to the weather report.
And tommorow morning, it will be much colder than today.
The temperature might be minus three. It is an unbelievable weather here.
So I should go to shopping right now.
Could you check my writing and make more natural sounding? Thank you!
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