I Wish You Since Now a Life Time Happiness
All of my past days
I have been deeply captured by my own innocence
I hope that I could have the simplest life in the world
Although Life is very unfair
And it has never allowed me to live simply and easily
I insist on living my life in my own way
I have been working arduously with all my passion and love to try to change the people and what is happening around me
Someone told me
What I have done has already touched the heart of God
And I do think I have been moved by what I dedicate to life
But some of them have never felt
At last, I was compelled to give up, because I didn’t have other choices
What had happened the day before yesterday
It was like your presence
All happened by all of a sudden
I was completely overwhelmed and lost
Today’s me
In some people’s eyes
I might have lost some parts of my simplicity and innocence
I was once feared by the complicated relationships
I have no idea that I would have a complicated life
And I have no intention that I would complicate other’s life
The start in the hot spring
……..
What had happened two days ago
Against my life goal that I have always perused
Since then, I had been bewilder and anxious
I had been confused about ability to face the messy of our future
But I have received your appreciation today
All of my restlessness
Has disappeared
I wish you
Since now a life time happiness
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Hi Shannon. This is an interesting story that you wrote. I would like to edit it, but I will re-read it for the deeper meaning. ---Jeff
I Wish You Since Now a Life Time Happiness
All of my past daysI have been deeply captured by my own innocence
I hope that I could have the simplest life in the world
Although Life is very unfair
And it has never allowed me to live simply and easily
I insist on living my life in my own way
I have been working arduously with all my passion and love to try to change the people and what is happening around me
Someone told me
What I have done has already touched the heart of God
And I do think I have been moved by what I dedicate to life
But some of them have never felt
At last, I was compelled to give up, because I didn’t have other choices
What had happened the day before yesterday
It was like your presence
All happened by all of a sudden
I was completely overwhelmed and lost
Today’s me
In some people’s eyes
I might have lost some parts of my simplicity and innocence
I was once feared by the complicated relationships
I have no idea that I would have a complicated life
And I have no intention that I would complicate other’s life
The start in the hot spring
……..
What had happened two days ago
Against my life goal that I have always perused
Since then, I had been bewilder and anxious
I had been confused about ability to face the messy of our future
But I have received your appreciation today
All of my restlessness
Has disappeared
I wish you
Since now a life time happiness
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