JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jan 7th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wo

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jan 7th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jan 7th I have something I want to tell you. I got finally NEW ONE. Well, you might think what is the new one? A cloth? Or the guitar? Maybe you couldn't reach at the answer if you have so much time to consider this. The one is the laptop which it is really special for me. The OS which is equipped with it is macOS. In other word, I got MacBook Pro 15inch to do so many thing that I could't with my former PC. For example, I want to edit my videos I shoot at where I went abroad, but I couldn't my former PC "Windows". Probably, it was really old one and, with lack of high performance of this, I couldn't edit them smoothly. It, however, happens for old one, but I can't stand with old PC freezing so much time. That's why I have decided to change into NEW PC. Plus, I have wanted have a laptop, not a desktop. I often come up with this emotion that I wish I could use PC everytime everywhere, but couldn't bring my desktop to out side. So, these reason are why I choose a laptop.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jan 7th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jan 7th

I have something I want to tell you. I finally got the NEW ONE. Well, you might think what is the new one? A cloth? Or a guitar? Maybe you couldn't reach at the answer if you have so much time to consider this (I didn't understand a lot what you meant by that but a closer way of saying this would be "Maybe you can't find the answer if you have little time to consider this). The one is the laptop which it is really special for me. The OS which is equipped with it is macOS. In other words, I got a 15inch MacBook Pro to do so many things that I couldn't with my former PC. For example, I want to edit my videos I shoot at where I went abroad, but I couldn't do that my former Windows PC. Probably, it was a really old one and with the lack of high performance of it, I couldn't edit them smoothly. However, it happens with an old one, but I can't stand an old PC freezing so many times. That's why I have decided to change to a NEW PC. Plus, I have always wanted to have a laptop, not a desktop. I often come up with this emotion that I wish I could use PC every time and everywhere, but couldn't bring my desktop outside. So, that is the reason why I chose a laptop.

You have a very good English level, mate. Keep it up and keep on writing. It's the only way to keep improving!! Greetings from Brazil!

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jan 7th( writing about MacBookPro) I have something I wan to tell you. I finally got the NEW ONE. Well, you might think what is the new one? A cloth? Ot a guitar? Maybe you can't find the answer if you have little time to consider this). The one is the laptop which it is really special for me. The OS which is equipped with it is macOS. In other words, I got a 15inch MacBook Pro to do so many things that I couldn't with my former PC. For example, I want to edit my videos I shoot at where I went abroad, but I couldn't do that my former Windows PC. Probably, it was a really old one and with the lack of high performance of it, I couldn't edit them smoothly. However, it happens with an old one, but I can't stand an old PC freezing so many times. That's why I have decided to change to a NEW PC. Plus, I have always wanted to have a laptop, not a desktop. I often come up with this emotion that I wish I could use PC every time and everywhere, but couldn't bring my desktop outside. So, that is the reason why I chose a laptop.

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