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Childish A 16 years old girl named Yu from Guangdong, China, she now is an entrepreneur, and she established a company which now has earned 10,000,000 RMB innovation reward from government. A few days ago, Yu was interviewed by a TV show, she said that she could earn more than 1000000 RMB one year, but some adults are indicted by computer games, and only earn the same salary as ten years ago. I am so ashamed, we adults have been existing in this world for so many years, but we haven’t achieved as much as a 16 years old young girl. I admire Yu’s courage and desire for entrepreneurship, Sometimes we might need to be as childish as a kid, only child has less anxieties and worries, they have more courage than adults, without fear, we may more likely to do something adventures.

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A 16 year old girl named Yu from Guangdong, China is an entrepreneur. She established a company which has now earned 10,000,000 RMB as an innovative reward from the government.

A few days ago, Yu was interviewed by a TV show. She said that she could earn more than 1,000,000 RMB a year, but some adults are addicted by computer games and can only earn the same salary as ten years ago.

I am so ashamed. We adults have been existing in this world for so many years, but we haven’t achieved as much as a 16 year old young girl. I admire Yu’s courage and desire for entrepreneurship. Sometimes we might need to be as childish as a kid. A child, in general, has less anxieties and worries, so they have more courage than adults. Without fear, we may become more likely to do something adventurous.


Shannon, I like your article. I hope your project is just as successful as hers was above!

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